Screenshot / Kinkenpolder: 1970
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21-July 17
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My first timeline-park in English, which is quite a risk since English isn't my best subject at school :) If my language is really bad, please say it, then I can find a solution for that.
Read the story in Dutch over here:
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2010:
Hello folks! Let me introduce myself. I’m George Nijhuis. I’m 28 years old and have a beautiful wife and the two sweetest kids in the world. At the moment I’m the CEO of a medium-sized themepark. The profit is going well and inside the office we’re really busy with something huge, but I got it to stay a secret. I’ve got this park by my father. His name is Oliver. But actually, everyone calls him Ollie. He has quite a grazy life. He was born in 1950 in a small town in the Netherlands. His father, and so my grandpa, was a very busy businessman. He had a high financial function at one of the biggest Dutch banks. He earnt tons a year and never gave a lot of attention to my father. We don’t know much about my grandma. All we know is that she moved back to Surinam when my father was a little child. That’s how my father lived without getting a lot of attention of his parents. In 1970, he finished a higher management study, but in that same year came the bad news from Surinam: my grandma died. While reading the testament, the whole family got amazed: my grandma owned a huge patch of ground on a countryside close to Amsterdam. She was never married with my grandpa, so the land came in hands of my father. In the weekend, he drove together with his best friend, Gary, to the land to see what was there.
First thing they saw was this huge villa.
Quite a good heritage…
On the backside, they had a good view over the land. They saw a little warehouse in the distance. They walked to it, opened the doors, and got amazed of what they saw there.
Sounds promising
I like it. The mars ground texture is a little bit weird. Don't know what that is supposed to be? Also, the foliage of the field (?) is a mess. Using just two foliage objects scattered around would look better I think.
Those are supposed to be rocks lol. The field is supposed to be a left "akker". I thought this was the best way to do it, two foliage objects would be more realistic but worse looking.