Screenshot / Pioneer Frontier Food Court

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  posted 7 years ago

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  SpiffyJack Offline

  Cool beans!

  Simple, Nice flow and the elements speak for themselves.

  posted 7 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Glad you're still working on this, you've definitely improved.

   

  Your buildings have good form, but need a bit more detail I think.  Texture wise some of them are a bit plain and the interiors or food counters are sort of dull.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  nice work!

  posted 7 years ago

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  Sulakke Offline

  The overall composition of the area is pretty nice. Like G Force said, the buildings have good shapes, but are a bit plain. The Subway building especially is way too plain. Looking at the other buildings as well, the roofs can use some more objects and details in particular. The flowers in the middle of the screen don't look good, as it looks like if they were planted on concrete. Needs some kind of border between concrete and plants, like your other planters. Those look great, btw! Keep it up.

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  Coasterbill Offline

  Very nice! the Subway building could use a little more detail but that's really my only critique.

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  Liampie Offline

  Having been there a few days ago, I recognized it right away. The scale seems very off though, not consistent and often too big. Too late to fix that I guess. Anyway, I'm looking forward to this park a lot.

  posted 7 years ago

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  navalin Offline

  Thanks for all the feedback. Definitely lacking detail currently while I flesh out the whole park to make sure I don't run out of objects prematurely. Scale has definitely been an issue on the project with nothing being remotely square in the park, so a lot of stretching to make it work in game. Finally at the point where the layout is pretty well set and this level of detailing is maybe 30% done, so looking forward to more feedback. Glad it's recognizable though.

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  Lagom Offline

  A very pleasant screen! I'm sure peeps would make it even better. Some buildings look quite empty but overall it's a very good start. Can't wait to see more.

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  I'm having trouble putting this together with the actual scene at Hershey from my memory of the park, but if I just view it as a sort of generalized american park it really feels quite well done.

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  Mr.Brightside711 Offline

  If you are going for accuracy, make sure sidewinder is valleyed

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