I agree with alex. The entire structure could use some more details. It is just made out of green glass and white walls. Especially the entrance of the center is really plain. It could at least use a name sign and an afdakje. The overall composition of the screen is pretty good.
The flip roofs on the lower right structure are a first for me, you pulled it off... I like it. if you could incorporate some flip glass on the glass structures it may work even better... But it's your design and your show.... still cool stuff
You guys trigger me with those wooden planks as zebra crossings! It's not cool, m'kay? On a serious note though, screen looks nice. I really like the grey building with those rounded corners. Quite a simple trick to make the buildings look different. Good job.
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alex Offline
Looking good. I'd maybe add some diagonal trims or something to strengthen the side of those glass roofs.
Sulakke Offline
I agree with alex. The entire structure could use some more details. It is just made out of green glass and white walls. Especially the entrance of the center is really plain. It could at least use a name sign and an afdakje. The overall composition of the screen is pretty good.
MK98 Offline
Thanks for the tips, and maybe you're right. I'll add more details like an afdakje lol.
SpiffyJack Offline
The flip roofs on the lower right structure are a first for me, you pulled it off... I like it. if you could incorporate some flip glass on the glass structures it may work even better... But it's your design and your show.... still cool stuff
Lagom Offline
You guys trigger me with those wooden planks as zebra crossings! It's not cool, m'kay? On a serious note though, screen looks nice. I really like the grey building with those rounded corners. Quite a simple trick to make the buildings look different. Good job.