Screenshot / Entrance Plaza Remodeled
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24-June 17
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Coors Park
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Much better than the first screenshot, the path textures work really well. Much more atmospheric and complete feeling.
Entrance itself is still lacking, but that can be left for another day.
Gorgeous. But, that one bit of crown molding on the middle diagonal pillar is still brown instead of white
The paths do work really well here. Surprising, but not because you did them, but because there's just so much shit going on with them it's weirdly working out. Good.
I'm going to nit pick a little because this is so good and only a small step from being excellent:
I would change the white chimneys to a more natural color. My eyes are immediately drawn to them when I should be looking at a more focal point of interest such as the train station or entrance. Try grey or brown? Also, that building is great but the walls above the pillars seem weirdly thin. Maybe it needs something to bulk it up aside from just Fisherman arches.
Also for the entrance, I agree with G Force that it could be redone. I would almost start from scratch even. It doesn't match much of anything in the rest of the area. I would continue with the same thematic elements you're using with the architecture on the left side (more bricks and woods).
Just noticing it now, but the paths to the top of the screen seem messy compared to the main entrance paths. So many different textures and trims going on. Try scaling it back a bit or go with something more organized like the entrance paths?
Those custom Coke machines are awesome.
Keep going!
I might redo the entrance tbh. It'll take me a few tries to get that right though. I agree with you about the midway path as well. I thought it was the mix of cena path and cobblestone but looking into it more, it's the road stripe that's sticking out. I'm finally almost have everything except the waterpark filled in to where most of what I need to do is finishing coaster supports and redoing shit that isn't to my standards. I'd definitely like for you to comb through the rest of the park like this though Steve.
That's a huge improvement. The plaza is really charming right now and those square path patterns work really well. Like people above have already mentioned, the entrance could be improved. It's not bad at all, but the pastel colors do not really fit the area.
Great work!
you're doing a lot better not spamming everywhere with quarter objects and it looks 1000% better for it. great job man
Thanks for the comments/compliments everyone. My goal as of now is to really fix and clean up the shit that needs it. I had a huge issue with that in the past and I still to some extent do now as well, but I'm one for breaking bad habits.
I think it's great! Basically the only thing that I can even find to criticize are the asymmetrical black lamp posts haha. But that's already me trying my hardest to give you any useful feedback aside of praise. You always build with intent and it shows here. I'm a big fan! I especially love the elevation change and all the planters.
much better.
I liked the previous screen better to be honest. It looked more tranquil and clean. I just think there is too much going on with all the different path textures. It's still great though. Just a little unnecessarily busy right now. Anyway, that's just my opinion.
Absolutly amazing.