Screenshot / Burg Rauhe Klinge

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  posted 8 years ago

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  Sulakke Offline

  The structure is pretty good, but your work really misses refinement. It could really use some finishing touches to make this come alive. I also think that the scale of all of your buildings is too big. It's too late to fix that in this project, but I would recommend smaller structures for your next project.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Julow Offline

  I really like it. I agree with Sulakke about the scale but it's not that bothering for me. This screen would have been better if the area around the paths in the bottom of the screenshot was finished. Good work. (32% rating? explanation?)

  posted 8 years ago

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  Coasterbill Offline

  Excellent! If you extended that black trim to the large tower on the right, added some small details like crown molding and roof details for that flat black roof this would be gold quality.

  posted 8 years ago

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  posix Offline

  Quite nice. Your macro is improving rapidly. It's not easy to make big buildings work in general, it's even more difficult to make them work as theming, but you've achieved it.

   

  I've never been a fan of the dark green hedge object you placed along the waterline. I would rather make a few more natural jagged rocks that transition into the water. Rocks that are half under water, half above. Just something that's more organic. It's also a little strange how a lot of the supports pierce through the rooves of building structures beneath them. I wouldn't change it here, but in the future be mindful about where supports go, so that your architecture can partner the ride, not exist next to it. You're still a bit too reliant on trees and foliage. I hope this will go away. Definitely at Silver level for me though.

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  zxbiohazardzx Offline

  i dont mind the size of the buildings. i think it works here. the only bothersome issue arising is the fairly large open white area's onthe sides. try to break those up using tiles or off-colors or some other elements and its a solid screen. the station building itself is rather underwhelming compared to the large castle the boats go through, consider rerouting so you can re-use same building or make it seem more of a whole

  posted 7 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Some of your textures can be broken up a bit, a lot of the spaces are quite empty and basic in that respect.  The rest is nice though, towers are well placed with respect to the path and ride.

  posted 7 years ago

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  YoloSweggLord Offline

  The structure looks nice, if only a bit too geometric. Get some diagonal walls in there.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  really nice v1! cant wait to see the full park.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Faas Offline

  I find the lack of detail on the building actually refreshing, looks good. Try to make up for it by adding fun stuff on the paths and maybe inside the buildings.

  posted 7 years ago

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  Lagom Offline

  I like it quite a lot. The log flume "brigde" is wonderful.
  Think you need to change the texture on that white building though. It just doesn't look good. But the structures look nice. Needs more life aswell; maybe some stalls, games, signs etc. Well, nice nonetheless.

  posted 7 years ago

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