Screenshot / I quit ~~ Neon Demon

05-June 17

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posted 8 years ago
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Liampie Offline

Get a new coaster and start rebuilding the area around the coaster. This sucks, but it's an opportunity. A second version is always much better and you will see that you have learned. Every time I've lost work, I came up with something better and I would forget the initial grief.
posted 8 years ago
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BlazingEmpireHD Offline

Too many colours imo. There's also so much to look at, it's hard to come down to a conclusive issue with it. Looks decent, but as Liam said, I think you need to refine a lot of this.
posted 8 years ago
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roygbiv Offline

The roads not being straight is my major grievance with this. I do like the color choices except for the coaster. The coaster feels like a severe afterthought regarding its layout and it's position around the buildings. The composition is nice but it comes on too heavy or too light in certain areas.
posted 8 years ago
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dr dirt Offline

The theming is fucking brilliant.. the coaster, not so much.
posted 8 years ago
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posix Offline

Interesting. Very difficult theme. You will learn a lot from this experiment.
posted 8 years ago
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nin Offline

That thumbnail is great, the screen not so much. Definitely works better in a cluttered (and more finished!) stage.
posted 8 years ago
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Julow Offline

That thumbnail is great, the screen not so much. Definitely works better in a cluttered (and more finished!) stage.

Yes, this is 30% finished... It's difficult to get into the atmosphere with all the green around. I would have black tiled everything but... *cries again*

I would have prefered to post just a portion of this screen, but since that's all that remains of this project..

Also, don't mind the final brakes + the turns at the end of the coaster, it was just built so I can test it.
posted 8 years ago
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Louis! Offline

Really love this work. Great stuff Julow.
posted 8 years ago
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Dr_Dude Offline

this is gorgeous
posted 8 years ago
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Julow Offline

Thank you! I reported the problem on Github, I hope they will find a way to fix it... It was even built in 4 angles ;'(
posted 8 years ago
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