Screenshot / I quit ~~ Neon Demon

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Liampie%s's Photo
    Get a new coaster and start rebuilding the area around the coaster. This sucks, but it's an opportunity. A second version is always much better and you will see that you have learned. Every time I've lost work, I came up with something better and I would forget the initial grief.
  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    Too many colours imo. There's also so much to look at, it's hard to come down to a conclusive issue with it. Looks decent, but as Liam said, I think you need to refine a lot of this.

  • roygbiv%s's Photo

         The roads not being straight is my major grievance with this. I do like the color choices except for the coaster. The coaster feels like a severe afterthought regarding its layout and it's position around the buildings. The composition is nice but it comes on too heavy or too light in certain areas.

  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    The theming is fucking brilliant.. the coaster, not so much.
  • posix%s's Photo

    Interesting. Very difficult theme. You will learn a lot from this experiment.

  • nin%s's Photo

    That thumbnail is great, the screen not so much. Definitely works better in a cluttered (and more finished!) stage.

  • Julow%s's Photo


    That thumbnail is great, the screen not so much. Definitely works better in a cluttered (and more finished!) stage.

    Yes, this is 30% finished... It's difficult to get into the atmosphere with all the green around. I would have black tiled everything but... *cries again*

     

    I would have prefered to post just a portion of this screen, but since that's all that remains of this project..

     

    Also, don't mind the final brakes + the turns at the end of the coaster, it was just built so I can test it.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    Really love this work. Great stuff Julow.

  • Dr_Dude%s's Photo

    this is gorgeous

  • Julow%s's Photo

    Thank you! I reported the problem on Github, I hope they will find a way to fix it...  It was even built in 4 angles ;'(

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