Get a new coaster and start rebuilding the area around the coaster. This sucks, but it's an opportunity. A second version is always much better and you will see that you have learned. Every time I've lost work, I came up with something better and I would forget the initial grief.
Too many colours imo. There's also so much to look at, it's hard to come down to a conclusive issue with it. Looks decent, but as Liam said, I think you need to refine a lot of this.
The roads not being straight is my major grievance with this. I do like the color choices except for the coaster. The coaster feels like a severe afterthought regarding its layout and it's position around the buildings. The composition is nice but it comes on too heavy or too light in certain areas.
That thumbnail is great, the screen not so much. Definitely works better in a cluttered (and more finished!) stage.
Yes, this is 30% finished... It's difficult to get into the atmosphere with all the green around. I would have black tiled everything but... *cries again*
I would have prefered to post just a portion of this screen, but since that's all that remains of this project..
Also, don't mind the final brakes + the turns at the end of the coaster, it was just built so I can test it.
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Liampie Offline
BlazingEmpireHD Offline
Too many colours imo. There's also so much to look at, it's hard to come down to a conclusive issue with it. Looks decent, but as Liam said, I think you need to refine a lot of this.
roygbiv Offline
The roads not being straight is my major grievance with this. I do like the color choices except for the coaster. The coaster feels like a severe afterthought regarding its layout and it's position around the buildings. The composition is nice but it comes on too heavy or too light in certain areas.
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posix Offline
Interesting. Very difficult theme. You will learn a lot from this experiment.
nin Offline
That thumbnail is great, the screen not so much. Definitely works better in a cluttered (and more finished!) stage.
Julow Offline
Yes, this is 30% finished... It's difficult to get into the atmosphere with all the green around. I would have black tiled everything but... *cries again*
I would have prefered to post just a portion of this screen, but since that's all that remains of this project..
Also, don't mind the final brakes + the turns at the end of the coaster, it was just built so I can test it.
Louis! Offline
Really love this work. Great stuff Julow.
Dr_Dude Offline
this is gorgeous
Julow Offline
Thank you! I reported the problem on Github, I hope they will find a way to fix it... It was even built in 4 angles ;'(