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28-May 17
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Silver Hills Amusement Park
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Do I spot an Arrow mine train....?
Clean, very clean. Too clean. It could use a bit more foliage on those empty patches, and some underbrush too. Also, not really shouting Frontierland for me, more generic Americana. Add some barrels, cacti... stuff to make the theme stand out more.
Perhaps a bit negative, but don't think I don't like this, far from. It's great stuff and it's very well done. I just think it needs improvement.
Path feels really dull as well, could definitely use some benches, and trash bins.
@jappy, yea maybe your right and it is a bit too much generic Americana.
For the open patches of grass, I know its a bit open but that was also a little bit what I was aiming for, I am also trying to save objects, but I will try to fill it up a bit more.
@G Force, Good ideas, will add some more stuff to the paths to make them a bit fuller.
Not bad, definitely a good start and the basketball thingie is pretty cool. Architecture feels also quite okay, but i agree with Jappy, it doesn't screem "Frontierland" for me.
It could really use some more life! Maybe add some barrels, benches, bins, little shops, signs for the restaurant, things to show the purpose of the other building more and maybe some dirtyness here and there (Frontierland also doesn't mean having a straight flower line on clean grass).
But all in all quite decent and it's always good to see you're still working on this! Looking forward to see more!
I like the supports on the mine train, that long piece of straight track looks awkward and so very realistic for an Arrow mine train
The basketball game looks neat.
Screen at overall looks a bit dull though. Path is really wide and I don't like the aba pattern used. Paths are also in great need of more life by placing banks, bins, lanterns,... maybe some extra planters?!
Archy is not really bad but the steel roofs are ruining it. That blue building looks like it has a nice facade but you've put so many steel roofs in front of it it took the whole view from the building away. I'd delete them here. Same goes for the green building, I'd delete the steel roofs who are in front of it and only keep the roof above the terrace. And trim it a bit more.
I hope the mine train layout is as shitty as it should be!
I love the supports on the coaster.
I'm not in love with the steel roofs though and I think the overhang on the blue building is a bit overwhelming. I'd lover it 1 unit and make it 1/4 tile long instead of a full tile long. That would improve that building immensely.
Tried to make it a little less empty. I will add trash cans later when I add pathing to the park.