Screenshot / LunaPark Adelaide - Beachfront

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    The textures on the beach are phenomenal.

  • G Force%s's Photo
    Colors and textures have really improved since I first saw this. Really nice work here, especially on the beach.

    Only thing I'd suggest is either swapping the queue rails around the seating area to that metal and glass fence you used next to it, or simply paint then black instead of gray.
  • Steve%s's Photo
    Really great. Incredible in the sense that each individual structure is vastly different than the last yet overall the picture is coherent. Atmosphere and texture use all around is also a huge plus here.

    My only suggestion is to maybe smooth out the textures on the beach just a little bit. The idea is great, but it could be even better. Maybe try more tan colors as a buffer from the bright sand to the darker textures near the rocks?

    Great work dude!
  • ricest%s's Photo

    That beach atmosphere has me feeling like im legit there, awesome stuff.  

     

    Attached Image: Screen Shot 2017-05-25 at 1.03.46 PM.png

     

    I was thinking that some foliage like this could be a nice addition.  Thoughts?

  • pierrot%s's Photo

    The entrance structure seems too forced to me, atmosphere is fantastic otherwise.

     

    Also consider to rise the palm trees a bit, I understand what you're going for but it was sunkened way too much.

  • SpiffyJack%s's Photo

    Cool trash bins, cool tower tops, cool layout... very creative :) 

  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    Love it. I like the worn/washed out look of it. I think that could be pushed just a step further, but conservatively. Also I agree with the palm trees, I think some more overgrowth of everything would help either he idea.
  • Goliath123%s's Photo

    radelaide

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Some relevant comments here: fair call about using some brown grass, raising the palm trees, and adding some tan. Still need to work out how to add aesthetic air-conditioning ducts.

     

    Unfortunately @pierrot, imo the real life equivalents of these entrances are literally placed on tarmac. It's less of a solid, ornate structure and more of flimsy obviously man-made archway. Nicely built, but not nicely incorporated into surroundings. Hopefully seeing it more contextually with actual "within LunaPark" content will help a bit.

  • Julow%s's Photo

    So great, even if this screen could have been 3x better with peeps. Can't wait to see more. 

  • historyfreak92%s's Photo

    I like the palm trees and the sidewalks! I sometimes wish that texas would have and older park like this but my guess is no because of the 1900 Hurricane back then!

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    I'm not a fan of the road lines used around the dirt areas; feels very unnatural. The rest looks very nice!

  • Liampie%s's Photo

    It's quite hectic exhausting to look at, even without peeps. Paradoxically I think this screen would be better with peeps.

  • Cocoa%s's Photo

    show us the front face ya pleb

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    ^there's unfinished shit in that view haha, soon.tm

     

    @CC9 keeping the road lines was an oversight, thanks for pointing it out

     

    @Liam any way to make it seem less exhausting to look at (obviously peeps will be added in the end, would that be enough to help it?)

  • mintliqueur%s's Photo

    Jus or fun? That is the question!

     

    Also I love the sunken palm trees, can't see what's bothering about them!

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Shameless alt. angle plug: Attached Image: LunaPark Beachfront (alt angle).png

  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Now you see, I don't think trams run on multilayer B&M track ;)

     

     

    Really good stuff, the face is great. But the buildings look a bit...strange. I can't put my finger on it, but I think Liam said it best. I don't think they really match.

     

    Nonetheless i'm interested in this. I wanna see more.

  • alex%s's Photo

    Love this Stoksy. Only thing I have a problem with is the imbalance between the bright colours around the gate and the relatively dull colours of the boardwalk/beach area. Is there any way you can add some bright detailing to those buildings or the path? Even just some coloured bunting might be enough.

     

    Edit: the face is excellent.. you couldn't resist showing that off eh? :p

  • Description

    LunaPark has been built in Sydney and Melbourne while the Gold Coast has Movie World and Dreamworld. Unfortunately, my home city of Adelaide lacks any themepark let alone interesting coaster-related attractions.

    Trying to incorporate elements from other LunaParks into an Adelaide-inspired and located environment.

    Pictured is the beachfront leading towards the LunaPark entrance. Not a recreation, but the buildings/structures/location is heavily inspired by real life locations.

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