Screenshot / A Lightning Racer GCI in Oasis of Excitement (Dusty Desert)!

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  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    Send me this file and I'll show you how much better it can look without all of the extra shit. The layout itself is probably pretty decent but you're not letting it breathe.

  • SpiffyJack%s's Photo

     


    But also, now that I think of it, it's s good idea not to put the same style of coasters next to each other like that. While it's fine to have multiple woodies next to each other, its looks poor to have a bunch of modern twister woodies next to each other. Good parks are about contrast. Contrast, contrast, contrast. I want that word to really stick. It's why covering every inch of park with trees or coasters looks bad. You want there to be some breathing room and/or variety with your park. Keeping that in mind should take you a long way

     

    I will agree with Sensual on this one. In addition, contrast also includes heights as well as what type of track supports are being used. For example, as mentioned.. to have multiple woodies next to each other.. Involves extensive amount of wood supports that inevitably block everything below track height.. and that can be a bummer. So as mentioned above, give some breathing room and get creative to minimize supports, use raised terrain to give the illusion of height, yet keeping a track height to ground ratio at a usable height where needed.   

  • ricest%s's Photo

    Or just do what gets you hard, wish more people had that philosophy

     

    but don't post it unless you actually listen to advice

  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo

    I've kept quiet for a long time. It's time to set a thing or two straight. Take it with a grain of salt as I want to help you, not hurt you.

     

    I honestly think it's fine you want to come here and share your work. That's a great idea of your's. However, you seem to fail to listen to a single word all of us have told you many a time before. I've just gotten sick of it. You're not a bad builder, but I'd like to think of where you could be already if you listened. For me, I joined, and I wasn't that great, but in only four months of listening and taking heed to what others have said, I've gotten so much better. You were showing a lot of promise, but that seems to drift away when you revert back to your old ways. Hint, don't revert back to your old ways if you truly want to improve

     

    What bugs me most about your screens and lack of listening is that those who have actually put so much time and effort into their screens, much more than you, go unnoticed because mediocre screens such as this flood the front page. There's been many a case where an honestly great image just kind of skirted past everything because everyone was too busy caught up in what your little mediocrities.

     

    I ask that you either take our words of advice and actually try to improve or simply post elsewhere.

     

    I do not want to see very much more quality screens go unnoticed because of rather disappointing screens as this.

     

    We've said many many times and ways you can improve and not have this happen, all you have to do is listen.

     

    Can you do that for us? Once try and actually take our advice and listen? Just think of where you could get. 

     

    All you have to do is listen and take action upon their advice.

  • Dombot%s's Photo


    I honestly think it's fine you want to come here and share your work. That's a great idea of your's. However, you seem to fail to listen to a single word all of us have told you many a time before. I've just gotten sick of it. You're not a bad builder, but I'd like to think of where you could be already if you listened. For me, I joined, and I wasn't that great, but in only four months of listening and taking heed to what others have said, I've gotten so much better. You were showing a lot of promise, but that seems to drift away when you revert back to your old ways. Hint, don't revert back to your old ways if you truly want to improve

     

    What bugs me most about your screens and lack of listening is that those who have actually put so much time and effort into their screens, much more than you, go unnoticed because mediocre screens such as this flood the front page. There's been many a case where an honestly great image just kind of skirted past everything because everyone was too busy caught up in what your little mediocrities.

     

    I ask that you either take our words of advice and actually try to improve or simply post elsewhere.

     

    I do not want to see very much more quality screens go unnoticed because of rather disappointing screens as this.

     

    We've said many many times and ways you can improve and not have this happen, all you have to do is listen.

     

    Can you do that for us? Once try and actually take our advice and listen? Just think of where you could get. 

     

    All you have to do is listen and take action upon their advice.

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  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo


    But also, now that I think of it, it's s good idea not to put the same style of coasters next to each other like that. While it's fine to have multiple woodies next to each other, its looks poor to have a bunch of modern twister woodies next to each other. Good parks are about contrast. Contrast, contrast, contrast. I want that word to really stick. It's why covering every inch of park with trees or coasters looks bad. You want there to be some breathing room and/or variety with your park. Keeping that in mind should take you a long way

     

    He based it on Lightning Racer, it's logical that there are two right next to each other. 

  • imlegos%s's Photo

    There's 3 woodies in the screen.

    Sens is obviously refering to the third that adds nothing to the screen.

  • SensualEthiopianPolice%s's Photo

    yeah duelings are fine but i think that woodie in the background doesnt serve much of a purpose. An arrow hyper might fit better or basically any steel coaster instead of a woodie in order to shake it up a little bit.

  • Poke%s's Photo

    jesus christ, how about half of the commenters here stop wasting their energy and time whining about this guy's screens and just comment on the screens you find decent ffs

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