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screen_3965 Oktoberfest @ Coors Park

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Comment System Offline
    comment below
    posted 8 years ago
  • Goliath123%s's Photo
    Australia Goliath123 Offline

    Gorgeous

    posted 8 years ago
  • Stoksy%s's Photo
    Australia Stoksy Offline

    You know most of my thoughts on this park. Excellent use of crazy paving to break up the path like that, excited for peeps.

    posted 8 years ago
  • chemist%s's Photo
    United States chemist Offline

    This is the Shotguns I love! Clean and Original! 

    posted 8 years ago
  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo
    United States YoloSweggLord Offline
    I like your use of canvases, but the facade of the grey building looks a bit empty. Maybe because of the lack of door/windows.
    posted 8 years ago
  • Doomblade%s's Photo
    Germany Doomblade Offline

    I really don't feel like playing cultural ambassador just because I was born in Bavaria, but 'Pilsner' is exactly that one type of beer you wouldn't get or want at Oktoberfest, it's available here but much more of a Northern Germany - thing. So just for the sake of realism, I'd not serve a Pilsner at that section of the park, much more a 'Helles' or perhaps a 'Weißbier / Weizen' ;) Other than that I really like the screen, quite atmospheric.

    posted 8 years ago
  • Sulakke%s's Photo
    Netherlands Sulakke Offline

    This is great! I love the crazy path kites pattern, really fits the theme somehow. The empty white wall could a window or an extra brick texture to break it up a little bit.

    posted 8 years ago
  • G Force%s's Photo
    United States G Force Online
    I agree on the white wall, perhaps it's just because is the center of this area but it's the first thing my eye goes to here. The awning are also a bit too complex for my linkings, which I mentioned to you earlier.

    Perhaps there is a bit too much path for this area of the park, but I think it's a minor issue. The standard dressings should give this s more complete look.
    posted 8 years ago
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo
    United States Coasterbill Offline

    Excellent

    posted 8 years ago
  • Steve%s's Photo
    United States Steve Offline
    I still find the park name a bit strange. Maybe use Coors' parent company Molson as the park name, similar to what Budweiser is to Busch (Gardens)?

    The screen is good. I agree with most of the comments so far. To me the worst offender is the path, not so much the selection of it but the expanse of it. Could definitely use some planters in the mix. The colors are a little messy, mostly with the awnings. I would still to one or two awning colors in this little area just to clean it up a bit. Great stuff!
    posted 8 years ago
  • bigshootergill%s's Photo
    Canada bigshootergill Offline

    Lovely setting, you're latest work is so enjoyable!

    posted 8 years ago
  • RMM%s's Photo
    RMM Offline

    it's techinically good. there's no doubt.

     

    but, it just seems a bit sterile; even picturing peeps.

     

     

    i'm trying to pick apart exactly what makes it feel sterile and i'm not entirely sure what that is. maybe try adding color to the actual building itself instead of just the awnings/canvas'?

    posted 8 years ago
  • inthemanual%s's Photo
    United States inthemanual Offline

    I still find the park name a bit strange. Maybe use Coors' parent company Molson as the park name, similar to what Budweiser is to Busch (Gardens)?

    The screen is good. I agree with most of the comments so far. To me the worst offender is the path, not so much the selection of it but the expanse of it. Could definitely use some planters in the mix. The colors are a little messy, mostly with the awnings. I would still to one or two awning colors in this little area just to clean it up a bit. Great stuff!

     

    coors park sounds like a baseball stadium. 

    posted 8 years ago
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    United Kingdom Louis! Offline

    Yeah agreed with RMM, its sterile and void of any atmosphere, which is a shame, cause it is good work.

    posted 8 years ago
  • Steve%s's Photo
    United States Steve Offline

    coors park sounds like a baseball stadium.

    It is! At least that's what I was told. And maybe you knew that and are messing with me. Not cool, T.
    posted 8 years ago
  • RWE%s's Photo
    Germany RWE Offline

    Selling Pilsener at Oktoberfest  - 0/10!

     

    Seriously, technically  it's good, but i can't see any Oktoberfest/bavarian connection or even something german overthere...

    posted 8 years ago
  • Austin55%s's Photo
    United States Austin55 Offline

    Pretty good for a WoF knockoff.

    posted 8 years ago

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