Screenshot / Wild West area of Green Fir Grove

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  posted 8 years ago

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  Jappy Offline

  I like this a lot! Pretty neat archy and a cool coaster. My only issue is that the path doesn't match the tone of the area.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Coasterbill Offline

  Excellent work

  posted 8 years ago

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  SupraTheHedgehog Offline

  Hey, that is pretty good! Simple, but very enjoyable.

   

  Good first screen!!

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  Steve Offline

  Not bad! Some of the colors really work here but throwing some others in the mix makes things a little messy. I love the bright blue and red but then having the dull red and the brighter blue with greens just kind of misses the mark for me.
  
  Overall composition is good though. Maybe not have your paths at such a sharp/squared angle next time, makes things a bit more organic. The skill is there though, nice stuff!

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  Louis! Offline

  Nice work!

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  BlazingEmpireHD Offline

  This is very impressive for a first screen, and knowing you, you'll easily keep that reputation up.

   

  I do agree with the others on the colours. Some of them don't work for me; though, the blue and red building(s) in the front do.

   

  Keep it up, you're well on your way to starpointe...I mean stardom.

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  mintliqueur Offline

  Definitely a very good first screen! As said the composition's very nice, the scale likewise. You have the right approach to the game to be successful at this site, I think. Work on the details, particularily in the architecture. One or two more colours wouldn't hurt either.

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