Other than the fact this is literally a less good Westwinds, Russ is certainly an excellent player and copying him isn't the worst thing you could do. Unbelievable level of improvement from some of your initial screens. Once you get confident try utilise this skill for another less copied theme.
I think this screen is a lot more alive than others from this project. Right now all of your buildings are one story and need more variation. I also think varying your inspiration from Gforce to some other builders will help this feel a lot more original if that makes sense.
Try to keep the same roof texture on a building; you have a diagonal tiled roof right in the middle of the screen between steel roofs (I know there's a diagonal steel roof somewhere).
The planters seem like they've just had some trees placed in there without much thought; try adding flowers and other foliage while cleaning up the tree placement a bit.
I see someone who is determined! Watching someone else progress besides myself is amazing thing to watch! Only weak point I can see is your foliage. And I see your accustomed to flat surface, don't be afraid to play around with making mountains and changing the terrain ! Gives it more character
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G Force Offline
Seeing this park is relatively surreal.
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Stoksy Offline
Other than the fact this is literally a less good Westwinds, Russ is certainly an excellent player and copying him isn't the worst thing you could do. Unbelievable level of improvement from some of your initial screens. Once you get confident try utilise this skill for another less copied theme.
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Liampie Offline
You're developing many aspects of your parkmaking, including a dangerous trim addiction.
CoasterCreator9 Offline
Very Westwinds-lite.
Try to keep the same roof texture on a building; you have a diagonal tiled roof right in the middle of the screen between steel roofs (I know there's a diagonal steel roof somewhere).
The planters seem like they've just had some trees placed in there without much thought; try adding flowers and other foliage while cleaning up the tree placement a bit.
chemist Offline
I see someone who is determined! Watching someone else progress besides myself is amazing thing to watch! Only weak point I can see is your foliage. And I see your accustomed to flat surface, don't be afraid to play around with making mountains and changing the terrain ! Gives it more character
chorkiel Offline
Seeing as how Eastwinds is apparently an actual project in the works. Should we call this southwinds or northwinds, henceforth?
imlegos Offline
Ethiopia is a south eastern country, right?
Lotte Offline
pacificoaster.exe
Lotte Offline
East-Arica, located in the Horn of Africa west of Somalia east of Sudan
G Force Offline
I also have trademarked the names Southwinds and Northwinds, so he'll need to come up with a new name.
SensualEthiopianPolice Offline
Lotte Offline
how about starpointe?
ricest Offline
Pull a Kvothe and name it the true name of the wind
chorkiel Offline
Well SensualEthiopianPolice's Worlds of Ashbury Park is a bit long.
Poke Offline
I do enjoy this. Has a very nice pleasant simplicity.