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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • trav%s's Photo

    Looks really clean. I'd like to see a little more landscaping to take this to the next level. 

     

    Oh, and don't forget some stairs on that MCBR catwalk.

  • Version1%s's Photo

    The following turns look way too big for the height of the MCBR imo.

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    Agree with Trav.

     

    Please add more supports to the station roof.

  • SensualEthiopianPolice%s's Photo

    Agree with Trav.
     
    Please add more supports to the station roof.

    oh yeah, I knew I forgot something
  • Coasterbill%s's Photo

    The transfer track is fucked, but everything else is pretty great. Nice flow!

  • RWE%s's Photo

    Best stuff i've seen from you yet, foliage could have some more love, add stairs to the MCBR and some more technical details to the station and it's very good in my opinion!

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    This is definitely an improvement but I think the station needs some room to breathe. it is a little to cramped for the room that it has. I would say keep the core idea of the structure but make it a bit wider. 

  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo

    How would that trans...


    The transfer track is fucked

    nevermind.

     

    The supports on your turns are angled the wrong way, they should face into the turn. The station feels a bit too plain, I feel like everything above the tracks could be redone. You forgot stairs to the MCBR. I'm not a fan of how the high fence at the bottom left just ends into a shorter fence, it creates a weak spot where guests could easily scale the fence. I like the brick texture you're using for paths, though, it's a lot better than the tarmac you usually use.

  • Lotte%s's Photo

    somebody has looked at starpointe's backstage

  • Faas%s's Photo

    Technically not bad, but incredibly boring. 

  • Julow%s's Photo

    I personally don't mind if it's boring for the moment, it's nice because you're improving and you deserve encouragements. This look like a training project, everything is starting to look solid and as a semi-realist builder I don't care about the transfer track. I agree that for your next works you should probably go for something crazier. 

    Good job : ) !

  • dr dirt%s's Photo
    It kinda seems like you're close to a breakthrough in your parkmaking skills. Like trav mentioned - some more elevations to create some layering is the next step. I also recommend smoothing out the sand/grass lines with foliage or rocks or flat texture to eliminate the grid effect.

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