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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    Perspective on those blue/red/white/tan awnings is throwing me off a little. Seems too low from this angle (I'm sure it's perfectly fine though).

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    Awnings that Stoksy mentioned look rather overdone for my liking.
  • Iron Rattler%s's Photo

    I honestly don't love this screen  compared to everything else you've shown from this project. While the composition still seems great a lot of the object choice and the textures are extremely distracting.

  • alex%s's Photo

    I also can't work out what's going on with that roof/awning structure. Needs some verticals. Surely that brown roof that extends from the building is too low?

     

    Rest is nice. I like the stepped paths a lot.

  • SSSammy%s's Photo

    this looks great, reminds me of when i first come to ne and saw the different ways people were playing the game. this looks very origninal, keep up the good work

  • Sulakke%s's Photo

    Not your best screen, but I think it's mostly a result of a bad screenshot choice. What's there is mostly path and some small parts of buildings and rides. I agree with the guys above about the awning things. They look weird. Also, the fence work could be a little bit more consistent. And the paths need more benches and bins for sure. Otherwise everything in there looks fine. I'd even say great.

  • Louis!%s's Photo

    It all looks rather clunky.

  • Poke%s's Photo

    It's just so unbelievably messy. Can't even tell what's happening on the left side of the screen. Really poor colour choices too.

  • posix%s's Photo

    Those super big trees someone combined from LL shrubs never work. They hide everthing. I'd replace.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    Awnings that Stoks and CC9 are the only thing that needs adjustment, seems way to over complicated for what they are.

     

    Rest is nice really, I think this is just a bad angle... or rather it doesn't lend it self to screenshots very well.

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    It all looks rather clunky.

    that is the right word.
  • chemist%s's Photo

    Shotguns i used to love looking at your screens but lately its been clunky like everyone else said. Don't get me wrong, very great ideas and concepts in this ! Just a bit too much and not clean and simple.

  • bigshootergill%s's Photo

    Just to weigh in on this screen since it's getting mixed reviews.

     

    First off, the stuff you've been doing lately has been fantastic, I've thoroughly enjoyed it. And what's here could be slightly improved (that "thing" on the left side of the screen for example), as with any screen. But you're simply not really showcasing anything interesting here, it's some pathways with some buildings on the outskirts and an unfinished station, so personally everyone's gripe is more due to poor choice of screenshot in my opinion. I'm sure this mixed in with the design, with the gallery of screens you've posted about this park, is great.

  • Austin55%s's Photo

    I'm super proud of you for not cropping the shit out of this

  • FredD%s's Photo

    If you really want to make it look more indian, more native American... I'd paint everything in blue and white! ;)

     

     

    JK, great screen. 

  • Faas%s's Photo

    Cool screen. I would maybe change the colour of the pathing around the coaster station so everything doesn't blend into each other as much. 

  • Julow%s's Photo

    To be honest I don't understand half of the things in this screen. I'm divided because I don't know why you posted this, your other screens for this project are so clean and better. Probably not the best angle.

  • Xeccah%s's Photo
    I ended up cleaning this area a good bit, but I still don't like it. Does the path blend too much in?
  • Liampie%s's Photo

    How should we know if you haven't shown us the updated area? :lol: I think what your park and especially this section needs is just areas of nothing other than greenery. The central 'island' in this screen should be just green. Either forest, a grass field, or both. Whatever. No buildings, terraces or awning orgies.

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