Screenshot / #BoatDay2017

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Scoop%s's Photo
    Not another boat fiesta
  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    The 'trav bridge' returns haha. Glad you were able to move the boat, really digging the colours. Only thing I'd change is maybe a subtle path difference under the black steel roof (eg cena path) otherwise it looks a little too 'plonked down' imo.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    That's a lot of path, I think it would look better if you broke it up with some different levels or perhaps replaced some of it entirely with scenery or theming.

     

    I also think that brick and red roofed building is a bit dull, if its basically straight ahead of peeps when they are walking towards it across the bridge, I think they would want something a bit more interesting and eye catching to see.  Rest of the buildings are all nice though, and I like the style you're going for so far.  Just needs a bit of freshening up to make it pop and really capture the atmosphere that you want.

  • Julow%s's Photo

    So glad you removed the LOTR rocks. Otherwise I totally agree with G Force. Excellent choice of colours, this is so vibrant. Maybe hidding the water parts of the coaster would help? I don't know.

     

    Can't wait to see the finished result, looks so good.

  • alex%s's Photo

    That lifeboat is the shit.

    Only thing i'm not feeling is the placement of that black roof structure. It's obscuring the view of the boat! I would move it to somewhere amongst the trees on the left of the bridge.

  • SSSammy%s's Photo

    love it. nice colours

  • trav%s's Photo

    The reason for the little black roofed structure is it's supposed to be like a 'pay extra'/charitable donation thing for the Lifeboat, who sponsor the ride.

     

    You pay a little bit of money and/or make a donation and then have a walk around the lifeboat! They also sell lifeboat themed merchandise where the profits go back into the RNLI. I've tried to make the little structure look as temporary as possible, as it would be in this situation. Maybe using a canvas roof instead might help?

     

    As for the pathing, I'm tempted to put some games stalls in the centre, but I feel that might take away from the lighthouse and the lifeboat. I'll play around with the architecture a bit as well to make it more interesting. 

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