Screenshot / Thunderbolt & B&M (redo)

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 8 years ago

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  It's a shame that the loop is so far back from the pathway; it seems to be missing out on some great sight lines.
  
  Foliage could use some tweaking; I'm not the best at it myself, but a lot of people recommend checking out pac as his foliage seems to have purpose in every object placement.
  
  Floorless color choice is great!

  posted 8 years ago

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  GigaG Offline

  The go-kart board seems to be advertising some pretty interesting services.

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  Mattk48 Offline

  I don't think I want to sit down in those go karts

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  Coasterbill Offline

  It's almost incredible how quickly you're improving.

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  SensualEthiopianPolice Offline

  
  

  It's almost incredible how quickly you're improving.

  I dunno. I guess something clicked. Still can't figure out a lot of stuff still 

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  trav Offline

  You've got a good base here, time to add some little details to bring it to life. 

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  Could maybe throw some additional detail into the wooden supports; footers, metal crossbars where the gokarts go under, that kind of thing.

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  CoasterCreator9 Offline

  [ntamin22' timestamp='1493071292' post='720387'] Could maybe throw some additional detail into the wooden supports; footers, metal crossbars where the gokarts go under, that kind of thing.

   

  This will help add to the detail.

   

   I think that, along with foliage refinement, a bit of composition improvements, and adding life is what your work needs.

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