Like I've told you a bunch, I really love the colors and style your going for here. Just about everything is pretty fantastic.
Though Id try and clean up those trees in the middle with the inspector as well as add some bracing at the top facades on the right side.
Perhaps that hopper ride is in a bit of an odd spot as well, seems way to close to the path and kind of shoved away in the corner, usually those are along midways in kiddie areas, rather in corners of main plazas.
I like it. Looks great. The path elevation in the top left is a little bit strange. I would make it a little more diagonal, so that it doesn't really have this funnel shape. I don't like the 'Westford's' building. It looks really thin and weak. I'm sure you can make that one look better!
Sorry Gdb, but I don't really see this as western, it feels much more generic to me. I think it's the structures themselves, the textures are western, but the details and actual forms of the facades don't feel very western to me.
I also think you're relying too heavily on the wooden beams across the board; on the buildings, for fences, trims on the station. Try mixing it up a little!
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Stoksy Offline
You should be able to use tile inspector so the tree doesn't glitch over the fence
Jappy Fan Offline
I'm liking this. Very much. I love western themes and this one has quite a unique feeling. The brown/reddish path worjs great here.
G Force Offline
Like I've told you a bunch, I really love the colors and style your going for here. Just about everything is pretty fantastic.
Though Id try and clean up those trees in the middle with the inspector as well as add some bracing at the top facades on the right side.
Perhaps that hopper ride is in a bit of an odd spot as well, seems way to close to the path and kind of shoved away in the corner, usually those are along midways in kiddie areas, rather in corners of main plazas.
Sulakke Offline
I like it. Looks great. The path elevation in the top left is a little bit strange. I would make it a little more diagonal, so that it doesn't really have this funnel shape. I don't like the 'Westford's' building. It looks really thin and weak. I'm sure you can make that one look better!
trav Offline
Sorry Gdb, but I don't really see this as western, it feels much more generic to me. I think it's the structures themselves, the textures are western, but the details and actual forms of the facades don't feel very western to me.
I also think you're relying too heavily on the wooden beams across the board; on the buildings, for fences, trims on the station. Try mixing it up a little!
Coasterbill Offline
Very nice!
nin Offline
Apologies for the bump, but I'm just now seeing this. Those two facades are brilliant.
G Force Offline
If you want someone to finish this park I'd be thrilled too.