I quite like this - the atmosphere is coming through, especially with to go karts + turnaround. I think perhaps using the shortest grass piece for the standalone grasses rather than the water reeds would make it more subtle.
I think what you should focus on next though is your scale. Everything kind of feels too spread a part. Maybe add some buildings to livin the area up a bit.
This is some really good stuff. I saw some people complain about the layout of the go karts, but they're mostly short and 'twist-ey'. Very well executed.
The woodie's turn is a bit too big (according to the height of the hills) in my opinion. But I don't know what the velocity of the train is in that situation, so it might be just about enough.
I love this two-coaster trend you've been doing, Sens. They're small enough to be considered a design yet large enough to almost be a believably sized family park.
I like this screen. I feel like the cobble path could use an edge, and the foliage is a bit off, but other than that the coasters seem nicely placed, if not a tad bit too barren. For the most part I agree with Scoop and Dr. Dirt.
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Coasterbill Offline
Very nice!
][ntamin22 Offline
turn over the gokarts is very cool. nice detail with the track barriers.
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Scoop Offline
DUDE Keep up the good work
you are rapidly improving.
I think what you should focus on next though is your scale. Everything kind of feels too spread a part. Maybe add some buildings to livin the area up a bit.
Impulse Offline
This is some really good stuff. I saw some people complain about the layout of the go karts, but they're mostly short and 'twist-ey'. Very well executed.
The woodie's turn is a bit too big (according to the height of the hills) in my opinion. But I don't know what the velocity of the train is in that situation, so it might be just about enough.
YoloSweggLord Offline
I like this screen. I feel like the cobble path could use an edge, and the foliage is a bit off, but other than that the coasters seem nicely placed, if not a tad bit too barren. For the most part I agree with Scoop and Dr. Dirt.
G Force Offline
I could probably write 1,000 words or so on this screen, but I don't have the time.
However I feel you do, so spend more of it on this and getting it just right.