I love this, the log flume is very original while remaining simple and consistent with the rest of the area. The only thing I don't really like is the wooden NCSO fences you used on the station and for the paths.
Guess the only thing I'd say is that the roof over the lift is a bit weird at the bottom. Feels like the slop should only go down half way and then flatten out for the last quarter tile, rather than slope down for the entire tile.
Oh, and I guess the fact it's a bit close to the map edge. Maybe 3-4 more tiles and it would be fine, I think it's just a tad too close at the moment.
I think you should try playing around with the color of the wooden roofs on the station. Maybe a dull red? Also the brown path would look a lot better without the crazy paving tiles I think. Other than that I really like this.
By far your best work. Great stuff with the lift facades there.
Only criticism is maybe the exhibit could use some love. Also, maybe a different fence? Seems almost unsafe to have a several hundred pound buffalo behind nothing but two slats of wood. Maybe even try sinking it one unit? Not sure.
Thanks all for the replies and suggestions. Gonna take them into consideration!
I've been saying that this park will be probably finished in the summer, but if I'm able to maintain the current momentum, it actually might be finished in about a month.
What used to be a bare log flume this morning, has now turned into the start of the American zone of JWAK. In screen, Lilly Ann's Lumber Falls, the BBQ, the buffalo meadow and the raft to get you to the Australian area.
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FredD Offline
Why isn't the Buffalo meadow blue-white? Zero percent, start over again!
zxbiohazardzx Offline
Glad you added that 2x2 building, really helps
Faas Offline
Not bad! However, it does look like all the other log flumes you ever did.
Julow Offline
I love this, the log flume is very original while remaining simple and consistent with the rest of the area. The only thing I don't really like is the wooden NCSO fences you used on the station and for the paths.
Oh and those bulls. ♥︎ 80% for me
Jappy Offline
Funny. Veeeery funny.
G Force Offline
Oh, and I guess the fact it's a bit close to the map edge. Maybe 3-4 more tiles and it would be fine, I think it's just a tad too close at the moment.
][ntamin22 Offline
This is pretty neat; I definitely get the Zoo vibe. Still feels a little empty, somehow.
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Steve Offline
Only criticism is maybe the exhibit could use some love. Also, maybe a different fence? Seems almost unsafe to have a several hundred pound buffalo behind nothing but two slats of wood. Maybe even try sinking it one unit? Not sure.
Keep it up!
imlegos Offline
Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo
Louis! Offline
<3
CoasterCreator9 Offline
Love:
- Rapids layout
- Small path side buildings that add a wonderful atmosphere
- Seating area overlooking the lake
To consider:
- Fence cohesion
- Raft station could use some fence or structure to it
- Agree with Steve about the exhibit itself
FredD Offline
Fixed.
Jappy Offline
Thanks all for the replies and suggestions. Gonna take them into consideration!
I've been saying that this park will be probably finished in the summer, but if I'm able to maintain the current momentum, it actually might be finished in about a month.
mintliqueur Offline
Best screen yet from this project! Let's hope you can keep your momentum so we get to check this out in game soon!