Screenshot / Yankee Thunderbolt & Cannonball

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screen_3883 Yankee Thunderbolt & Cannonball

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posted 8 years ago
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Louis! Offline

lovely, really nice composition
posted 8 years ago
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Jappy Offline

You're making progress! The placement of the coasters is pretty nice but maybe you can colour the supports of the steel coaster something else than white? The woodie is already white, if both are white it looks a bit dull. Also sttill not a fan of some of the tree colours though. The birches should all have grey trunks and the lighter, fuller green. I can see now that's not the case for all of them.

Now on to the fun part: breathing life into it! Adding benches, ligths, stalls, bins, peeps...! Keep building!
posted 8 years ago
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Scoop Offline

by far the best work that you have shown us
posted 8 years ago
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chemist Offline

getting better
posted 8 years ago
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Bubbsy41 Offline

Looks very charming. The turn around on the arrow is much too drawn out and flat IMO. Also the path could use some life. I.e. Tables, food carts, small buildings etc
posted 8 years ago
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trav Offline

This is nice! I'd love to see some little food carts or an ice cream stand added along here.
posted 8 years ago
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CoasterCreator9 Offline

Interaction is great; foliage needs a bit of improvement as Jappy said and definitely some life as Jappy, Bubbsy, and trav pointed out.
posted 8 years ago
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RWE Offline

Great to see your in an improvement process. Not bad stuff! Now give it some life and make it interesting!
posted 8 years ago
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G Force Offline

Its weird that the coaster goes from Corkscrews directly into breaks. Needs a hill or turn or something between those elements.

Also, the diagonal supports should be evenly spaced, currently it seems you just put them wherever.
posted 8 years ago
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IonZer0 Offline

Yeah, maybe move the corks before the turn or add a helix, but keep this version just in case.
posted 8 years ago
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SSSammy Offline

you also need at least one flat piece between the corkscrews, especially when you're taking the piss in the lead up like that
posted 8 years ago
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Lilith Offline

I'd love to sit on that bench in the middle and watch the coaster over the lake. Very quaint.
posted 8 years ago
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dr dirt Offline

id rather something original rather than a try to build in vogue but it turns out blatantly unoriginal honestly. Besides that the turn is too big
posted 8 years ago
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SensualEthiopianPolice Offline

id rather something original rather than a try to build in vogue but it turns out blatantly unoriginal honestly. Besides that the turn is too big
it's not unoriginal? Yeah it's pretty plain but give me specifics otherwise, there's not really much I can do about it
posted 8 years ago
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dr dirt Offline

it's not unoriginal? Yeah it's pretty plain but give me specifics otherwise, there's not really much I can do about it

It just looks like it was built without much prior vision. Almost like it's built just to use the patchy foliage w/ 1k rocks look and the paths with only curbs for fences. It looks fine and all, I just wish it had some expression with your own style if that makes sense.
posted 8 years ago
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