Screenshot / Twilight of elves

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  posted 11 years ago

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  nin Offline

  Looking great! The white awning is a bit of an eyesore, but I do like the contradiction it's giving with the surrounding areas. It's something I'll complain about, but it's also something that I know I personally would do as well. I guess i'm just having a bit of a hard time knowing what type of park this is: is it fully immersive, with no mention of the outside world, or something where guests get a glimpse of the falsehood of the surroundings? Seeing more "backstage" stuff like this tells me that its the latter, but it's just hard to tell with the few screens we have.
  
  Either way, this is pretty rockin'. I love the two-toned cobblestone path you've made, but maybe you add a bit of that detailing under the structure to the right, just to ease the cut-off going on: we can tell it's an added detail because it just ends.

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  Chocotopian Offline

  I really like all the supporting pillars.  And I agree the two-tone is nicely done.  The green roof seems a bit extreme atm, but I don't really know its purpose.  What does it represent?

  posted 11 years ago

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