Screenshot / JWAK - The old temples
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13-April 17
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The temples of JWAK! RIde our thrilling coaster Escape from Shaladrivana, or visit the Bengal tigers in their amazing home. Or maybe you prefer a stroll through our railway museum where we showcase the engines and coaches that run on our little railway?
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Looks pretty cool. Seems like you're getting a better handle on working out your foliage. I like the layering of the grass fence with the wooden posts in front, gives a great effect!
As for improvements, maybe it's just because I've been working on some ruins in my own park, but making the temples a little more worn down might make it look better, perhaps a little more overgrowth with bushes and vines, replace some bricks with 1K ruins. Also, the fence for the elephants seems short?
The railway museum seems a bit odd in its location lol
Needs more railway!
I agree with Louis, seems a bit forced to have a railroad museum in a park like this let alone in a Jungle area. Perhaps it could work as a side attraction to the park to give it a more touristy feel, but currently I think its a very odd place.
Outside of that, there is still WAY to much Grey. Everything is grey in this screen, what happened to your great color choice from your older parks? Not to say that this isn't good, because it is, but its feeling a bit stale which I never though we'd get from you.
Thanks for the suggestions!
@bigshootergill: I'll try to make it look a bit more overgrown and ruinous, have forgotten do to that. As for the elephant fence, I'll take a look at it, that area is still unfinished.
@Louis!: I know, but it's actually prototypical. Belgian zoo Pairi Daiza has a railway museum in it's Russian area. So I thought: why not in an Indian area?
@RWE: it has enough trains as it is now.
@G Force: About the railway, see my reply to Louis! I know it's quite grey but I find it difficult to counter. The real life inspiration I built it from is nothing but grey, so I try to counter it with colourful foliage. I do have to say it's not that visible from thi angle but there's orange, blue and yellow all over the place; But when I'm adding vines like BSG said, I'll be sure to give them some colourfu flowers.
Thanks all!
Ahh, in that case I'll take another look at the building. Thanks!
I actually don't think that at all. Parks often have random stuff like that in them.
Looks good! I don't mind the grey-ness except maybe that it doesn't feel very Indian?
Some of your best work to date!
I don't think the gray is a problem, personally. There are pops of color from the flowers and such which will likely be more apparent at different viewing angles, and the nature of the old temples is fine as gray, don't really know how you'd make old temples vibrant.
Fucking great
feels a bit textureless.... maybe try looking for objects that give more earthy tone to the theme...
Make roofs black again!
I agree on most of the feedback you've got. All the grey makes it look really cold. I would suggest to paint the roof of the museum black, and change the orange flowers to dark red.
Bottom left is really good. Keep working hard.
Thanks all! I'll try to do something with all the advice I got.
How the hell did the rating drop 20% during the night?!
Edit: made some changes already, but not yet all of them. Most of these modifications are from last night adn this morning.