Screenshot / Yukumo Village

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  posted 8 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  Looks nice, I think you'd be suited to LL with the amount of well done trackitecture.

  posted 8 years ago

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  SensualEthiopianPolice Offline

  Oooh I love me some good ncso like this, albeit everyone does Asian trackitecture, it'd be nice to some shakeups

  posted 8 years ago

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  alex Offline

  I like the overall composition. The archy needs some work though - some of the buildings are literally just trackitecture. I'd suggest putting more care into the walls. The station for instance is weird in that it has a row of banners suggesting an open structure with then a row of windowed walls above. Then you have an awkward overlap on top of that. I'd try and simplify things a bit. Start with just 1 basic wall perhaps and add trims, a base, poles on the edges, windows etc.

   

  I also think the brake run going over the path is a missed opportunity for a wall/gateway/bridge of some sort - instead you just have white box supports.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Lilith Offline

  Thanks everyone
  
  @louis I am working on my first post-NEO LL project, it's just coming very slowly
  
  @togorandu I know Asian roofs are easymode lol but this won't be the only trackitecture you se from me!
  
  @alex good points. I'm not sure how I feel about the bottom right house or the top right either, those will most likely go. I'll also look into the station and brake run, I'm sure I can come up with something cool there. Thanks

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  Lilith Offline

  Does this look any better? The arch isn't perfect but I think it all looks kinda cool

   

  

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  G Force Offline

  I like it, nice work here.  Definitely an interesting style so far.

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