I'd change the roof and walls of the station to brown. Perhaps remove the road lines or color them brown as well... just the overload of grey sort of kills it.
Potential for sure, here. However, I do agree with G Force.
Also, foliage could be touched upon. You're using the same two huge trees, spice it up! Throw in some single and quarter tile trees or even some bare grass could be effectively done.
Pretty good. Just misses some peeps, I think, as the paths are really bland. The station buidling is not pretty, but it works here. The other building is quite simple, but does the job too. I would remove the road lines. They are unnecessary and will cause a lot of glitches with peeps. Not a fan of the planters. The oak trees are ugly, the grass seems too bland for a planter in a theme park. Also, the diamond shape of the concrete path around the planter is not in harmony with the rest of the path. One of the reasons for this is the inconsistent use of the road lines. Maybe some bigger lampposts can break up the path some more and bring in some more color. Speaking about the color, I dig the magneta flowers in the screen. Good color choice.
I changed the roof to brown, however I'm not sure if changing the colours of the walls to brown is the best idea, the coaster itself is already very brown and I'm worried the whole area will become a brown blob if I change it to brown. I do agree that on this screen it looks pretty grey, but if you see the rest of the area I don't think it is that much of a problem. However I will experiment with some different colours and I will also post an overview of the whole area once its a bit more finished.
@RWE
Thanks dude!
@steve
I think the foliage thing may also be a bit of an issue of how the screenshot was taken, the area has a lot of different tree types, but just on this screenshot they are all big, but your point is taken and I will change it around a little bit.
@BlazingEmpireHD
Noted, will add some colours
@Sulakke
Removed the road lines and I also added dirt to the planters near the bottom of the trees, I do like the oak trees though . What would you suggest for the diamond shape paths around the planters? I feel like if I would remove them the area would become overloaded with the crazy brown path.
@mintliqueur
Thanks, I'm not sure if the brown walls will work because the coaster itself is already very brown and I want to prevent it from becoming one big brown blob, maybe I will try something like green?
Sorry for the double post, but I made some changes, this screen also shows a bit more of the surrounding. Not sure yet what to do with the middle planter. Very unfinished obviously, so now is the time to still give some feedback so I can improve it also while building!
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G Force Offline
Pretty fantastic outside of the colors.
I'd change the roof and walls of the station to brown. Perhaps remove the road lines or color them brown as well... just the overload of grey sort of kills it.
But like I said its very good otherwise.
RWE Offline
Solid screen, dude! Not sure about the roof colors though...
Great to see you're still working on stuff!
Steve Offline
Also, foliage could be touched upon. You're using the same two huge trees, spice it up! Throw in some single and quarter tile trees or even some bare grass could be effectively done.
Otherwise, not bad!
BlazingEmpireHD Offline
Other than colours, it looks good. Keep it up.
Sulakke Offline
Pretty good. Just misses some peeps, I think, as the paths are really bland. The station buidling is not pretty, but it works here. The other building is quite simple, but does the job too. I would remove the road lines. They are unnecessary and will cause a lot of glitches with peeps. Not a fan of the planters. The oak trees are ugly, the grass seems too bland for a planter in a theme park. Also, the diamond shape of the concrete path around the planter is not in harmony with the rest of the path. One of the reasons for this is the inconsistent use of the road lines. Maybe some bigger lampposts can break up the path some more and bring in some more color. Speaking about the color, I dig the magneta flowers in the screen. Good color choice.
posix Offline
Looks like something G Force would do.
mintliqueur Offline
Big fan of the roof colours, here. But browner walls would maybe look better. Very nice work over all though, indeed very G Force-esque.
Recurious Offline
Thanks everyone for your comments.
@G Force
I changed the roof to brown, however I'm not sure if changing the colours of the walls to brown is the best idea, the coaster itself is already very brown and I'm worried the whole area will become a brown blob if I change it to brown. I do agree that on this screen it looks pretty grey, but if you see the rest of the area I don't think it is that much of a problem. However I will experiment with some different colours and I will also post an overview of the whole area once its a bit more finished.
@RWE
Thanks dude!
@steve
I think the foliage thing may also be a bit of an issue of how the screenshot was taken, the area has a lot of different tree types, but just on this screenshot they are all big, but your point is taken and I will change it around a little bit.
@BlazingEmpireHD
Noted, will add some colours
@Sulakke
Removed the road lines and I also added dirt to the planters near the bottom of the trees, I do like the oak trees though . What would you suggest for the diamond shape paths around the planters? I feel like if I would remove them the area would become overloaded with the crazy brown path.
@mintliqueur
Thanks, I'm not sure if the brown walls will work because the coaster itself is already very brown and I want to prevent it from becoming one big brown blob, maybe I will try something like green?
Recurious Offline
Sorry for the double post, but I made some changes, this screen also shows a bit more of the surrounding. Not sure yet what to do with the middle planter. Very unfinished obviously, so now is the time to still give some feedback so I can improve it also while building!
Liampie Offline
Put the directions sign in the planter. And in that case make it slightly more decorated.
G Force Offline
CoasterCreator9 Offline
Steve Offline
Jappy Offline
Good looking screen! I agree that it looks more colourful now which is an improvement.
Recurious Offline
@liam
Something like this maybe? What do you guys think?
Stoksy Offline
That's what you want right there.
G Force Offline
I guess there is still too much grey in the roof with all that trim, same with the posts and trim around the steps in the station... but that's minor.
Definitely an improvement over the initial screen.