Screenshot / Silver Hills mine ride

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • G Force%s's Photo

    Pretty fantastic outside of the colors.

     

    I'd change the roof and walls of the station to brown.  Perhaps remove the road lines or color them brown as well...  just the overload of grey sort of kills it.

     

    But like I said its very good otherwise.

  • RWE%s's Photo

    Solid screen, dude! Not sure about the roof colors though...

     

    Great to see you're still working on stuff!

  • Steve%s's Photo
    Potential for sure, here. However, I do agree with G Force.

    Also, foliage could be touched upon. You're using the same two huge trees, spice it up! Throw in some single and quarter tile trees or even some bare grass could be effectively done.

    Otherwise, not bad!
  • BlazingEmpireHD%s's Photo
    I agree with all here. I think the screen would pop with colour, all ya got to do is add some :p

    Other than colours, it looks good. Keep it up.
  • Sulakke%s's Photo

    Pretty good. Just misses some peeps, I think, as the paths are really bland. The station buidling is not pretty, but it works here. The other building is quite simple, but does the job too. I would remove the road lines. They are unnecessary and will cause a lot of glitches with peeps. Not a fan of the planters. The oak trees are ugly, the grass seems too bland for a planter in a theme park. Also, the diamond shape of the concrete path around the planter is not in harmony with the rest of the path. One of the reasons for this is the inconsistent use of the road lines. Maybe some bigger lampposts can break up the path some more and bring in some more color. Speaking about the color, I dig the magneta flowers in the screen. Good color choice.

  • posix%s's Photo

    Looks like something G Force would do.

  • mintliqueur%s's Photo

    Big fan of the roof colours, here. But browner walls would maybe look better. Very nice work over all though, indeed very G Force-esque.

  • Recurious%s's Photo

    Thanks everyone for your comments.

     

    @G Force

    I changed the roof to brown, however I'm not sure if changing the colours of the walls to brown is the best idea, the coaster itself is already very brown and I'm worried the whole area will become a brown blob if I change it to brown. I do agree that on this screen it looks pretty grey, but if you see the rest of the area I don't think it is that much of a problem. However I will experiment with some different colours and I will also post an overview of the whole area once its a bit more finished.

     

    @RWE

    Thanks dude!

     

    @steve

    I think the foliage thing may also be a bit of an issue of how the screenshot was taken, the area has a lot of different tree types, but just on this screenshot they are all big, but your point is taken and I will change it around a little bit.

     

    @BlazingEmpireHD

    Noted, will add some colours

     

    @Sulakke

    Removed the road lines and I also added dirt to the planters near the bottom of the trees, I do like the oak trees though :p. What would you suggest for the diamond shape paths around the planters? I feel like if I would remove them the area would become overloaded with the crazy brown path.

     

    @mintliqueur

    Thanks, I'm not sure if the brown walls will work because the coaster itself is already very brown and I want to prevent it from becoming one big brown blob, maybe I will try something like green?

  • Recurious%s's Photo

    Sorry for the double post, but I made some changes, this screen also shows a bit more of the surrounding. Not sure yet what to do with the middle planter. Very unfinished obviously, so now is the time to still give some feedback so I can improve it also while building!

     

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  • Liampie%s's Photo

    Put the directions sign in the planter. And in that case make it slightly more decorated.

  • G Force%s's Photo
    Much better.
  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo
    Swing presence is a nice pop of color; looking like a lot of fun now.
  • Steve%s's Photo
    What Liam and G Force and CoasterCreator said.
  • Jappy%s's Photo

    Good looking screen! I agree that it looks more colourful now which is an improvement.

  • Recurious%s's Photo

    @liam

     

    Something like this maybe? What do you guys think?

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  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    That's what you want right there.

  • G Force%s's Photo

    I guess there is still too much grey in the roof with all that trim, same with the posts and trim around the steps in the station... but that's minor.

     

    Definitely an improvement over the initial screen.

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