Screenshot / Sprawl

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  posted 11 years ago

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  csw Offline

  Opinions on what to do with the large white building in the center are welcome. 

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  Milo Offline

  Make circular windows (inverted single rail coaster) and then sink geometry spheres as glass.

   

  I like this screen, it's messy but more experimental and daring in composition. Just make sure you don't sacrifice landscaping among all the buildings. The martian and rust tiles aren't really good imo... they look like a weird mix of landscaping and structure that doesn't really add anything.

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  Liampie Offline

  The most mantis-esque screen since mantis? Keep refining and experimenting! First thing you might want to change is how the coaster comes out of that building. The tunnel is just exactly in the wrong spot. One tile to the right, centered, would benefit the whole area. Also don't underestimate the power of queue lines. Don't squeeze them in corners, make them interesting as if it were an adventure ride. And for a big ride like this, the queue entrance should stand out a lot.

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  pierrot Offline

  I like the colors in this screen.

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  csw Offline

  Wish I had seen these replies earlier, I just submitted the finished product Oh well, I'll take them into account in the future

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