Screenshot / Maple River Renegade
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09-March 17
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Cute colors
The lay-out is pretty good, but this screen is not worth sharing.
If you're going to single out my screenshot, compared to the others we've been hit with recently, you could at least write more than one sentence.
If you don't have anything to show yet, don't show it yet. It's a nice start, but it's only 5% of a finished product.
The thumbnail on the front page looks lovely, that short drop with the splashboat track is very nice. The rest looks both unfinished and unfocused to me, layout seems a little too spread out and meandering.
About what? There's hardly anything in this screen to comment on.
Capitalize on that thumbnail. If you make the rest of it look as nice as that looked; this could be excellent. (2 sentences)
What's going on with the station return? it looks like the track just... ends.
It's merged.
That's what I thought at first, but the merge didn't make sense to me, as it seemed to serve no purpose.
I think the objective is to have it like those flume rides that meander around a water track and are then pulled up into the station.