I think it could use a bit more color. It all seems very brown and green right now. I also think some of the trunk coloring is odd. The theme comes across very well though.
Not a fan of the green roof at all, looks weird and blends too much with the foliage which itself needs a change of colour, in particular lighter trunks like G Force pointed out. Besides that the buildings look good, in particular the one on the right!
The building structures are pretty good. What is the theme exactly, though? Africa is huge. Like people already said, the tree trunks and flower beds need color changes. The light green benches have weird colors too. And I would change the umbrellas; they are too small and have horrible colors. Take this easy opportunity to add a splash of color to the screen! With some small changes this screen can easily go from 50% to at least 70%.
Really nice work MK, really loving the terrace. I agree about the trunk coloring problem and maybe the flowers next to the path are a bit too repetitive. But the buildings are well done and detailed.
Thanks for the comments. I changed some of the colors now. Bettah?
And about the theme.. well, I suppose it's South-African. But I'm thinking to adjust it with the surroundings and call it a Suriname-themed area. It's next to a Mexican GCI and a mine area.
Yeah it is slightly better, but the tree colors are still off. The foliage in general is kind of rushed compared to the architecture. There's no idea behind it.
Have you ever been to South-Africa? Doesn't look like that at all. Nor like Suriname. It's better to choose a theme before building, instead of vice versa...
It's definitely better but that roof still doesn't look right in my eyes, I'd try a darker shade of brown, or maybe black or grey. The foliage would probably look better if you made it greener and more lush. There's maybe a few too many of those pine trees.
I made this area next to the mine area I showed you two weeks ago. As the feedback told me, I should get more cohesion and better foliage. I think I improved both skills. I wonder what you think.
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Iron Rattler Offline
I think it could use a bit more color. It all seems very brown and green right now. I also think some of the trunk coloring is odd. The theme comes across very well though.
Austin55 Offline
Use the flowers to inject some color splashes.
G Force Offline
Change your tree trunk colors to the light brown please, all the different colors mess with my brain.
mintliqueur Offline
Not a fan of the green roof at all, looks weird and blends too much with the foliage which itself needs a change of colour, in particular lighter trunks like G Force pointed out. Besides that the buildings look good, in particular the one on the right!
MK98 Offline
I'll see what I can change.
Sulakke Offline
The building structures are pretty good. What is the theme exactly, though? Africa is huge. Like people already said, the tree trunks and flower beds need color changes. The light green benches have weird colors too. And I would change the umbrellas; they are too small and have horrible colors. Take this easy opportunity to add a splash of color to the screen! With some small changes this screen can easily go from 50% to at least 70%.
Julow Offline
Really nice work MK, really loving the terrace. I agree about the trunk coloring problem and maybe the flowers next to the path are a bit too repetitive. But the buildings are well done and detailed.
MK98 Offline
Thanks for the comments. I changed some of the colors now. Bettah?
And about the theme.. well, I suppose it's South-African. But I'm thinking to adjust it with the surroundings and call it a Suriname-themed area. It's next to a Mexican GCI and a mine area.
Sulakke Offline
Yeah it is slightly better, but the tree colors are still off. The foliage in general is kind of rushed compared to the architecture. There's no idea behind it.
Have you ever been to South-Africa? Doesn't look like that at all. Nor like Suriname. It's better to choose a theme before building, instead of vice versa...
MK98 Offline
mintliqueur Offline
It's definitely better but that roof still doesn't look right in my eyes, I'd try a darker shade of brown, or maybe black or grey. The foliage would probably look better if you made it greener and more lush. There's maybe a few too many of those pine trees.