Screenshot / New Park Area with a Soapchase and Chairlift wip

06-March 17
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screen_3754 New Park Area with a Soapchase and Chairlift wip

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posted 8 years ago
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Royr Offline
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posted 8 years ago
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Angroc Offline

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccceeee!!!!!
posted 8 years ago
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][ntamin22 Offline

It's like egg_head with steel roof.

There's a lot of grey going on, but you've got a pretty solid handle on architecture and the soap box looks cool. Could use some better planning.
posted 8 years ago
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CoasterCreator9 Offline

I really like the mountain scene. The village could use a little bit of improvement. It's a WIP so I'm looking forward to seeing more!
posted 8 years ago
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YoloSweggLord Offline

That's a really painful looking transition from steep to flat on the first drop of the coaster.
posted 8 years ago
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Iron Rattler Online

I think you should change the grey paths, they seem a little out of place and overwhelming right now.
posted 8 years ago
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Stoksy Offline

No idea why you'd choose grey tarmac path for this. Nice mountainous landscaping though. You should consider making the entire soapbox track invisible.
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Royr Offline

No idea why you'd choose grey tarmac path for this. Nice mountainous landscaping though. You should consider making the entire soapbox track invisible.

I will try out some other Paths. The Soapbox is actually imitating a "Sommerrodelbahn" , so i wont hide the track
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Version1 Offline

I will try out some other Paths. The Soapbox is actually imitating a "Sommerrodelbahn" , so i wont hide the track

A Sommerrodelbahn can't go up, though
posted 8 years ago
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RWE Offline

I like it, reminds me of Fluxtrance somehow.

The Sommerrodelbahn is great as it is, and it can go up too, of course, maybe it's a bit too much at some places in your layout though, but i wouldn't change it.

Architecture feels really great. Textures are very well done, steel roofs are a lazy decision but i think they are totally working here. What bothers me a little is that the buildings are feeling a bit generic, because their purpose is not clear.

The path is the biggest problem in this screen for me. The grey tarmac with some benches here and there looks pretty uninspired and boring... Try to make it more interesting by changing the texture and adding some cool small details here and there.

Overall solid work! You definitely have a lot of potential. Now you need to search for that things that make your work interesting and special. I would recommend to you to think more about small detailing and building purpose for achieving that. Definitely looking forward to see what you'll come up next!
posted 8 years ago
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Royr Offline

I like it, reminds me of Fluxtrance somehow.

The Sommerrodelbahn is great as it is, and it can go up too, of course, maybe it's a bit too much at some places in your layout though, but i wouldn't change it.

Architecture feels really great. Textures are very well done, steel roofs are a lazy decision but i think they are totally working here. What bothers me a little is that the buildings are feeling a bit generic, because their purpose is not clear.

The path is the biggest problem in this screen for me. The grey tarmac with some benches here and there looks pretty uninspired and boring... Try to make it more interesting by changing the texture and adding some cool small details here and there.

Overall solid work! You definitely have a lot of potential. Now you need to search for that things that make your work interesting and special. I would recommend to you to think more about small detailing and building purpose for achieving that. Definitely looking forward to see what you'll come up next!

Thanks alot for this constructive critism! I will definitely try to add more Detail. I've already changed the path, it surely looks much better now. Coming to your last recommendation: Im looking forward to use these Tips and all the other ones u and you fellow NE peeps gave me since im here! Thanks!
posted 8 years ago
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Louis! Offline

Brilliant!

Not sold on the B&M layout, and I think it needs a little more work to pull off the tarmac look, but the rest is gorgeous.
posted 8 years ago
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Version1 Offline

The Sommerrodelbahn is great as it is, and it can go up too, of course,

No it can't. Sommerrodelbahnen have brakes, therefore building upwards is a no-go, since cars could get stuck.
posted 8 years ago
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F0ndue Offline

I think the idea of the Sommerodelbahn is neat, but it's execution is lacking, if you're going for realism. Same thing about the B&M, the layout is just really awkward. But otherwise it looks fine.
posted 8 years ago
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RWE Offline

No it can't. Sommerrodelbahnen have brakes, therefore building upwards is a no-go, since cars could get stuck.

Why are there existing ones that go up then? Proove your information before writing, dude.
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Royr Offline

I think the idea of the Sommerodelbahn is neat, but it's execution is lacking, if you're going for realism. Same thing about the B&M, the layout is just really awkward. But otherwise it looks fine.
Yeah, i wasnt even trying to build it realistic, i just thought i would fit well there. The coaster isnt even near to be finished, these screens are focusing on the houses, chairlift and the Sommerrodelbahn^^
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Version1 Offline

Why are there existing ones that go up then? Proove your information before writing, dude.

Where?
posted 8 years ago
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Royr Offline
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posted 8 years ago
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CoasterCreator9 Offline

Damn, that looks amazing with the cobblestone path.
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