Screenshot / New Park Area with a Soapchase and Chairlift wip

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  • Royr%s's Photo

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  • Angroc%s's Photo

    Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccceeee!!!!!

  • ][ntamin22%s's Photo

    It's like egg_head with steel roof.

     

    There's a lot of grey going on, but you've got a pretty solid handle on architecture and the soap box looks cool.  Could use some better planning.

  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    I really like the mountain scene. The village could use a little bit of improvement. It's a WIP so I'm looking forward to seeing more!

  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo

    That's a really painful looking transition from steep to flat on the first drop of the coaster.

  • Iron Rattler%s's Photo

    I think you should change the grey paths, they seem a little out of place and overwhelming right now. 

  • Stoksy%s's Photo

    No idea why you'd choose grey tarmac path for this. Nice mountainous landscaping though. You should consider making the entire soapbox track invisible.

  • Royr%s's Photo


    No idea why you'd choose grey tarmac path for this. Nice mountainous landscaping though. You should consider making the entire soapbox track invisible.

     I will try out some other Paths. The Soapbox is actually imitating a "Sommerrodelbahn"  ,  so i wont hide the track
  • Version1%s's Photo


     

     I will try out some other Paths. The Soapbox is actually imitating a "Sommerrodelbahn"  ,  so i wont hide the track

     

    A Sommerrodelbahn can't go up, though 

  • RWE%s's Photo

    I like it, reminds me of Fluxtrance somehow.

     

    The Sommerrodelbahn is great as it is, and it can go up too, of course, maybe it's a bit too much at some places in your layout though, but i wouldn't change it.

     

    Architecture feels really great. Textures are very well done, steel roofs are a lazy decision but i think they are totally working here. What bothers me a little is that the buildings are feeling a bit generic, because their purpose is not clear.

     

    The path is the biggest problem in this screen for me. The grey tarmac with some benches here and there looks pretty uninspired and boring... Try to make it more interesting by changing the texture and adding some cool small details here and there.

     

    Overall solid work! You definitely have a lot of potential. Now you need to search for that things that make your work interesting and special. I would recommend to you to think more about small detailing and building purpose for achieving that. Definitely looking forward to see what you'll come up next!

  • Royr%s's Photo


    I like it, reminds me of Fluxtrance somehow.

     

    The Sommerrodelbahn is great as it is, and it can go up too, of course, maybe it's a bit too much at some places in your layout though, but i wouldn't change it.

     

    Architecture feels really great. Textures are very well done, steel roofs are a lazy decision but i think they are totally working here. What bothers me a little is that the buildings are feeling a bit generic, because their purpose is not clear.

     

    The path is the biggest problem in this screen for me. The grey tarmac with some benches here and there looks pretty uninspired and boring... Try to make it more interesting by changing the texture and adding some cool small details here and there.

     

    Overall solid work! You definitely have a lot of potential. Now you need to search for that things that make your work interesting and special. I would recommend to you to think more about small detailing and building purpose for achieving that. Definitely looking forward to see what you'll come up next!

     Thanks alot for this constructive critism! I will definitely try to add more Detail. I've already changed the path, it surely looks much better now. Coming to your last recommendation: Im looking forward to use these Tips and all the other ones u and you fellow NE peeps gave me since im here! Thanks!
  • Louis!%s's Photo

    Brilliant!

     

    Not sold on the B&M layout, and I think it needs a little more work to pull off the tarmac look, but the rest is gorgeous. 

  • Version1%s's Photo


    The Sommerrodelbahn is great as it is, and it can go up too, of course,

     

     

    No it can't. Sommerrodelbahnen have brakes, therefore building upwards is a no-go, since cars could get stuck.

  • F0ndue%s's Photo
    I think the idea of the Sommerodelbahn is neat, but it's execution is lacking, if you're going for realism. Same thing about the B&M, the layout is just really awkward. But otherwise it looks fine.
  • RWE%s's Photo

    No it can't. Sommerrodelbahnen have brakes, therefore building upwards is a no-go, since cars could get stuck.


    Why are there existing ones that go up then? Proove your information before writing, dude.
  • Royr%s's Photo

    I think the idea of the Sommerodelbahn is neat, but it's execution is lacking, if you're going for realism. Same thing about the B&M, the layout is just really awkward. But otherwise it looks fine.
     Yeah, i wasnt even trying to build it realistic, i just thought i would fit well there. The coaster isnt even near to be finished, these screens are focusing on the houses, chairlift and the Sommerrodelbahn^^
  • Version1%s's Photo


    Why are there existing ones that go up then? Proove your information before writing, dude.
     

     

    Where?

  • Royr%s's Photo

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  • CoasterCreator9%s's Photo

    Damn, that looks amazing with the cobblestone path.

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