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06-March 17
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It's all well and good but that Wild Mouse doesn't feel right...
The only thing that I don't like is the double little turn after the lift hill, otherwise this is very good. You really have your own style, everytime I see a screenshot from you I know that you made it. Some people can think that some things are clumsy, like the wild mouse, but it gives you a real personality.
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Other than the wild mouse, it's perfect!
I saw "downtown" and immediately thought it was roaring racer. lol
The mouse is really out of place. And the log flume cars could be taken out too.
I really like the parking garage
The "park" sign is neat. I love the idea of a rooftop wild mouse but yeh, this just looks awkward.
I had a simpler layout before. I could make the double turn at the top of the lift instead of between. Thought it would be better stretched over both roofs and it needed more speed. zooom
the really "strange" thing i see is the grey wall. on my monitor it is blend and doesnt stand out enough to its mildly lighter topping and the black path beneeth it. Rest is lovely
wow idk why but this is extremely charming with that mouse
The footers really confuse me. I'm not sure if you really can anchor the footers on the roof of a building. Usually the supports cut through the buildings and are anchored to the ground.
It's a bummer that the peeps can't see much of the wildmouse.
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Harder to see on Thunder Dolphin, but there's usually a more complex support structure built into the building than just footers on top.
I really like this! You're definitely on a good way to create your own cool unique style. I love the parking garage!
The wild mouse is indeed pretty weird, but somehow i like it. It's weird in a good way, if that even exists.
The buildings are all not bad. You managed quite well to give them an interesting shape. What i don't like is that you kinda used the same details over and over though. You should try more to give almost each building something interesting and special to make your stuff overall more interesting for viewers. Also you could fill some of these blank walls up with some details, especially the diagonals.
The other thing you could improve in my opinion is the foliage. There is a lot too much of it (especially a lot too much gras) for me, which makes it akward in my eyes. Try to give it some organization and structure!
Otherwise keep up the great work! I'm curious to see more!
I had little experience going into this bench so I know the details are reduced due to the ability of finding the right object. The foliage is something I've been trying to work on and I find it to be the hardest part when making a full scale park, overgrown was the format I was going for there.
Certainly interesting and different, its nice work.
Like it a lot. Reminds me of Lagom's work somehow, got that similar quirk and charm.
The pink building feels a bit bland to me, and what is that wooden structure on the lifthill?