Screenshot / Red F80 Screenshot 2

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 8 years ago

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  SensualEthiopianPolice Offline

  ehhhh... could you maybe zoom out a bit, the coaster is kinda hard to make out

  posted 8 years ago

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  cAmeron Offline

  Needs work (I mean a lot.) but like Sens said, a more zoomed out picture would help us.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  "Showing basic touches can make a BIG difference."
  
  You're not showing much, and certainly no basic touches...
  
  I would start with the landscape. Random patch of flat rocky soil looks weird. The trees do not help creating a credible environment either. There is not a single bush in this screen. Add underbrush and a few more different trees that look good together.

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  YoloSweggLord Offline

  There's also a lot of tree clipping, try not to be so spastic with zero clearance.

  posted 8 years ago

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