How about we all calm down and rather than yelling at eachother let's help out fellow community members. Clearly This screen needs some help but rather call it shit let's give some criticism.
I can't tell if you're trolling or just new to the game, but as the other comments don't seem to explain what's wrong with the park, I'll have a go:
All your layouts are too short, especially the Schwarzkopf, and none of your coasters have brakes. The random elevated helix on the woody doesn't flow well either. A short layout is reasonable for the junior coaster but dropping straight into the station without any brakes doesn't look right.
I wouldn't elevate the water level above surrounding terrain (and if you do, add walls to the side to hold the water in).
You seem to have used only two types of tree and placed them in large blocks, which looks unnatural.
The landscaping by the Schwarzkopf looks like you just dragged it down with the mountain tool and called it a day - there is a discontinuity with the outside of the park (as the rest of the park is flat, I'd have used a tunnel there instead).
Also, this appears to be a downscaled and lower quality version of the screenshot you already posted. I'd recommend capturing screenshots at full zoom unless the content would not otherwise fit - here, most of the image is of the blank space surrounding the park (also, it generally looks better if you black tile that out).
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YoloSweggLord Offline
Why did you post a second screen? It doesn't show anything more than what the other screen showed, and you're just cluttering up the front page of NE.
RWE Offline
Oh no...
Roaringracer123 Offline
A. FREAKIG LOOK CLOSER AND B GO LEAVE IF YOU HATE THIS.
SensualEthiopianPolice Offline
This is our community too, you can't tell us to leave after you post pics to an open forum
CoasterCreator9 Offline
And I don't mean the screenshots, it's more the attitude.
Roaringracer123 Offline
THAT WAS A JOKE. GET A SENCE OF HOUMOR IF YOU CAN NOT TOLERATE THAT. I BEEN WORKING HARD ON THAT PARK.
GammaZero Offline
Do you even understand what this site is? Are you fucked in the head?
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IonZer0 Offline
A moment of silence for the most misunderstood artist of our generation...
SensualEthiopianPolice Offline
Who can say where the road goes...
IonZer0 Offline
"In the arms of the admins... banned awayy from here"
SensualEthiopianPolice Offline
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j-fWDrZSiZs
IMAJesse Offline
why
brandonmarks94 Offline
this guy cant be more than 10 years old, or is just a troll, id just ignore him if i were you
X7123M3-256 Offline
All your layouts are too short, especially the Schwarzkopf, and none of your coasters have brakes. The random elevated helix on the woody doesn't flow well either. A short layout is reasonable for the junior coaster but dropping straight into the station without any brakes doesn't look right.
I wouldn't elevate the water level above surrounding terrain (and if you do, add walls to the side to hold the water in).
You seem to have used only two types of tree and placed them in large blocks, which looks unnatural.
The landscaping by the Schwarzkopf looks like you just dragged it down with the mountain tool and called it a day - there is a discontinuity with the outside of the park (as the rest of the park is flat, I'd have used a tunnel there instead).
Also, this appears to be a downscaled and lower quality version of the screenshot you already posted. I'd recommend capturing screenshots at full zoom unless the content would not otherwise fit - here, most of the image is of the blank space surrounding the park (also, it generally looks better if you black tile that out).
Louis! Offline
Topic locked.