Idk, I think the colours from the coasters and gift racks add a sufficient amount of colour to offset the brown.
I do think that your foliage is too manicured though, add some bullrushes/swamp plants in the river or alternatively have the monorail trench as a barrier but only a tile or two away from the rapids so you get a bit more of an overgrown feel.
The park seems to be suffering from Wof syndrome. It probably looks nice in game when you can scroll around, but it doesn't make for good screenshots because it's a bit muddled together. I get your trying to save objects, but sometimes a few well placed details and variances in style can really help.
Perhaps as well the colors are a bit basic, the foliage, archy, path, rides. Very simplistic color choices that make it seem a bit dull.
Beautiful work! I'm really excited to see this finished. What % would you say the park is right now?
Thanks! Probably 50% (if I'm being optimistic, lol)
The park seems to be suffering from Wof syndrome. It probably looks nice in game when you can scroll around, but it doesn't make for good screenshots because it's a bit muddled together. I get your trying to save objects, but sometimes a few well placed details and variances in style can really help.
Perhaps as well the colors are a bit basic, the foliage, archy, path, rides. Very simplistic color choices that make it seem a bit dull.
I honestly did struggle with this a little bit. I've been working on the new area for awhile now and I really like it in game, but I couldn't figure out what to feature in a screenshot. I personally think it translates much better in game. Then again, if it's suffering from WOF syndrome when WOF scored a spotlight and was overall a pretty amazing park, I can live with that. lol
I'll see what I can do to improve it a little though.
Least favorite screen of the park so far. Nothing particularly bad, but lacks the impact the other screens had.
As Russ said, it's a bit too brown, lacks many micro details the other screens had (though the interior of that gift shop rocks, loving the lines of peeps), and from what we can see the rapids look a bit tame. It could be a case of WoFitis as mentioned, but it's something to look out for as you move forward.
so is this dead or still being built? it's just i like this just i like your sunset valley, & sunset vista! i'm not trying to rush you or anything! i just hope i can explore this!
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Lagom Offline
Beautiful work! I'm really excited to see this finished. What % would you say the park is right now?
G Force Offline
Did K0ng make this?
Too much brown, especially in the buildings near the top.
Jappy Offline
Great stuff, but I can see where G Force is coming from. That goldish brown isn't really working for me.
Stoksy Offline
Idk, I think the colours from the coasters and gift racks add a sufficient amount of colour to offset the brown.
I do think that your foliage is too manicured though, add some bullrushes/swamp plants in the river or alternatively have the monorail trench as a barrier but only a tile or two away from the rapids so you get a bit more of an overgrown feel.
][ntamin22 Offline
This is missing something and I can't put my finger on what exactly.
Liampie Offline
A focal point?
G Force Offline
Perhaps as well the colors are a bit basic, the foliage, archy, path, rides. Very simplistic color choices that make it seem a bit dull.
Coasterbill Offline
Thanks for the feedback guys!
Thanks! Probably 50% (if I'm being optimistic, lol)
I honestly did struggle with this a little bit. I've been working on the new area for awhile now and I really like it in game, but I couldn't figure out what to feature in a screenshot. I personally think it translates much better in game. Then again, if it's suffering from WOF syndrome when WOF scored a spotlight and was overall a pretty amazing park, I can live with that. lol
I'll see what I can do to improve it a little though.
nin Offline
Least favorite screen of the park so far. Nothing particularly bad, but lacks the impact the other screens had.
As Russ said, it's a bit too brown, lacks many micro details the other screens had (though the interior of that gift shop rocks, loving the lines of peeps), and from what we can see the rapids look a bit tame. It could be a case of WoFitis as mentioned, but it's something to look out for as you move forward.
historyfreak92 Offline
so is this dead or still being built? it's just i like this just i like your sunset valley, & sunset vista! i'm not trying to rush you or anything! i just hope i can explore this!
Louis! Offline
Judging by the fact the screen was only uploaded a week ago, I would assume that yes, its still being built.
Coasterbill Offline
lol yup, still being built. I've added a few more details to these buildings also given the feedback.
historyfreak92 Offline
alright ill be looking forward to it! sorry if i judged! i wasn't trying too!
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