Screenshot / Entrance square

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  posted 8 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  The planters are a bit repetitive, perhaps get rid of some of them and make fewer-larger planters with more diversity of foliage.  A solid start though, perhaps a bit to much grey, maybe work in more purple, and white...

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  Jappy Offline

  I echo what G Force said about the planters. Try also to add some life with stuff like signposts, benches, litter bins, little stalls... Stuff like that makes it feel real.

   

  But apart from that this is a very good screen! You do show talent here.

  posted 8 years ago

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  battle boy Offline

  Very nice.

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  Brent Offline

  This looks great! Entrance reminds me of SFOG.

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  posix Offline

  Very clean, I like that.

   

  Perhaps vary the large trees a bit.

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  RWE Offline

  The planters really ruin it! Otherwise great work!

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  Sulakke Offline

  Looks nice and clean. Maybe a little bit too clean. Like everyone else mentioned the planters need some work. And I would change some of the lanterns against the planters to benches, to break the overkill of straight lines a little bit.

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  Tom_Dj Offline

  Lovely screen. Like mentioned before get rid of the planters. A smaller square after the entrance would have made it even more cosey although it's too late for that now.

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  SSSammy Offline

  cant believe no one has mentioned the planters yet. you should vary them up a bit.

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  alex Offline

  The building at the top is excellent. I really like the shape, colours & textures.

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  Lagom Offline

  Very nice. Love the soft colours. I think the planters are a bit distracting, but that's an easy fix. Can't wait to see more.

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  Faas Offline

  Looks really nice and cozy but I don't understand why those brick buildings have steel roofs. The 'normal' tiled roofs would look better imo, and add to the coziness.

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  Julow Offline

  I love it! If the rest of the map is empty, could you make it downloadable? This is the perfect entrance for the beginning of a classic theme park. 

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