Screenshot / Daredevil

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  posted 8 years ago

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  Impulse Offline

  Finally

  posted 8 years ago

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  Jappy Offline

  Finally the screen!

   

  Has a nice oldschool feel to it, I like the station.

   

  I'm not a fan of the foliage, but for me to give tips about that feels a bit hypocritical since that's the main criticism on my stuff... Maybe try to simplify it and try to avoid a grid pattern like those three birch trees right next to each other.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Impulse Offline

  Yeah, I see what you mean. I think more variation should do the trick, as well as some more colour.

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  RWE Offline

  Variation is not the problem. In my opinion your foliage needs a lot more structure, it looks like just randomly placed bushes and trees. Maybe try to build it more clustered.

   

   

  The rest has a nice feeling to it. Keep it up!

  posted 8 years ago

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  One of the better pieces of work on that map, in my opinion.

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  nin Offline

  Really liking this. Definitely over tree'd, an open parcel in with nothing but grass or something may do wonders here. The old school vibe is the real ticket seller tho, and the station and track details are great.

  posted 8 years ago

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