Screenshot / Grand Canyon Rapids

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 8 years ago

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  SSSammy Offline

  lots of great details and overall composition is very interesting, but again, same comments as i made on your other screen

  posted 8 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  It's good, but that path is way too distracting. One of the default textures would work much better in my opinion.

  posted 8 years ago

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  csw Offline

  You have the colors down, but remember that the Grand Canyon is in fact a canyon, not just a flat rocky desert. Make some of the rocks taller and perhaps incorporate some arch/hoodoo type rocky shenanigans

  posted 8 years ago

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  Kosherboy35 Offline

  I love the Big Thunder Mountain Feel

  posted 8 years ago

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  Jaguar Offline

  I agree with GForce on the path... there would be a lot less noise if you used dirt. The canyon also seems a little short and symmetrical in some areas.

   

  But overall, the composition and execution for this is awesome.

  posted 8 years ago

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