Screenshot / Egyptian Town & Anubis Station

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  posted 11 years ago

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  inthemanual Offline

  It looks like LL. Also way too brown, add more colors to liven it up

  posted 11 years ago

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  csw Offline

  I don't have a problem with it feeling like LL, but it's just so repetitive. Nothing sticks out as unique. 

  posted 11 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  It's very brown, but not too brown in my opinion. More contrast would help this screen though. Dark brown paths for example.

   

  The architecture is definitely too blocky, especially Anubis' building. I assume that the high 1x1 structures are supposed to be columns, but they don't look like proper columns. Also it's awkward how the columns don't align well with the roofs; the inner corners aren't supported except by a very thin wall. Lastly, the whole Anubis facade is very flat.

   

  I like your other screen better, but this is salvagable! And I'm very interested too see more; it's not a bad screen.

  posted 11 years ago

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  Poke Offline

  I know colour helps a lot, but Egyptian Towns aren't really that colourful though. I'll fix Anubis's station.

  posted 11 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  I love this screen. Has a great feel to it.

  posted 11 years ago

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  posix Offline

  I think this is pretty good. Its "natural detail" is great. Just the track placement isn't right. Looks like it does't belong in there.

  posted 11 years ago

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