Screenshot / Carrousel Paleis

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posted 8 years ago
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Zaiush Offline

Some trim or border along the edges of the roof would make this a lot better.
posted 8 years ago
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Brunooo Offline

You should hire a gardener
posted 8 years ago
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G Force Offline

Archy is a great start, but the textures are pretty bland. Not really a fan of the path or foliage either, definitely could use a bit more refinement and cleanup.

Same goes for the other screen, the ride is good, forms are good, but the textures and path are not.
posted 8 years ago
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MK98 Offline

Thanks for the comments. It's a old park, low-budget. So I thought a beautiful garden wouldn't be realistic.

I admit the paths could use some more coloring.
posted 8 years ago
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Cocoa Offline

I think there's a difference between not-beautiful-gardening and abandoned-city-weeds

otherwise- I'd say its a bit short looking maybe. also seems strange to have a 'u' shaped building which closes off the back and sides but then have paths go next to it anyway. make it have a reason to be closed off like that maybe?
posted 8 years ago
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Liampie Offline

Why isn't it symmetric? I'd do away with the windows and shutter anyway. It's very hard, but not impossible to recreate this building so that it becomes recognizable. Colours are a bit of a problem too, maybe it's a good idea to find a colour manager?

Just for reference

https://upload.wikim...g_caroussel.jpg
posted 8 years ago
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MK98 Offline

Thanks for the comments. You say some points I even haven't thought about. A darker color, or a color which is more green is very ugly on this building I tried that.

The paths are correct. On the right side of the building is a hall with miniatures inside.

I still can change the gardening though...
posted 8 years ago
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Tom_Dj Offline

Looking good. Really makes me wanna build the efteling again.
posted 8 years ago
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Louis! Offline

The scale seems so small! And that is coming from me! I'd try and make the structure a little bit larger, and give the roof line a bit more of an accent to make it less boxy.
posted 8 years ago
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MK98 Offline

Alright then, here is attempt 2:
posted 8 years ago
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Louis! Offline

That's better, foliage could still do with some work, but its improved a lot more with those simple additions.
posted 8 years ago
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