Screenshot / Sing with a Swing

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  posted 8 years ago

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  Stoksy Offline

  hey hey, new orleans archy

   

  Could probably do with a few more planters, i'd also ditch the tarmac and replace it with brick

  posted 8 years ago

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  Dimi Offline

  I agree with Stoksy. Nice atmospheric screen otherwise!

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  Jappy Offline

  Thanks! I'll see if I can fit some more plants in. Tarmac has been replaced already.

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  G Force Offline

  A bit to much path, kind of a theme it seems with this park though.
  
  Archy is good, maybe would like to see a bit more color and greenery on the facades though.

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  Jappy Offline

  ^True, but I don't think that's it's too much. The park consists of many plazas connected with smaller paths. I think it looks fine.

   

  Will add some greenery on the facades!

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  Recurious Offline

  I dunno, I kinda like the tarmac. Also, you are missing a deco trim piece on the window in the corner building on the left. Looks really good overall though.

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  Lagom Offline

  Love it. Not as atmospheric as some of your other screens, but still very good. I like the openness.

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  alex Offline

  I like that you have lots of larger architecture in this park but be careful that you don't have really abrupt transitions between street scenes and open tree/grass areas. The contrast looks too awkward. It's something I noticed a little in the Hip-Hop screen too.

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