Screenshot / VK: Flower Photospot

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  posted 8 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Its quite good, I like how everything is layed out and the colors you've chosen.  Not a huge fan of the architecture, it feels a bit simplistic, although I'm sure you're going more for cohesion with the rest of the maps which is more important.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Poke Offline

  Very messy. Especially that bottom right corner.

  posted 8 years ago

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  bigshootergill Offline

  It has potential. I like the centre garden and the building on the left. The rest just needs more refinement.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  It's not your best screen from this park, and indeed a bit messy. I like the overall composition of this area but the array of rather bland building cannot bring it to life.

  posted 8 years ago

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  alex Offline

  I really want to like this.. I love the storytelling you've set up and the ambition of the project and I've been looking forward to seeing you post a screen from it for a while.
  
  That said, It's kind of underwhelming. The path's are quite bland and the architecture is a little basic, lacking the playful inventiveness of the other screens. Especially compared to this one - http://www.nedesigns...little-kingdom/

  posted 8 years ago

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