Screenshot / Jörmungandr vs Thor

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  Recurious Offline

  Pretty cool. The only critique I have is that I feel like the swing ride is a bit thin. I think it would look better if the base was a bit wider. Or if the height would be lower. The proportions seem a bit off.

  posted 8 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  Will be great to see some new work from you this looks good!

   

  the dragon looks a little close to the ride though :/

  posted 8 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  I think there's a bit too much going on. The snake, the ship, the thunder stuff, the hammer, the queue, the ride itself... I'd take a more minimal approach to the ride, firstly getting rid of the queue cover, but if you insist on keeping all the theming elements I'd move the snake to the other side of ride, not directly under that huge coaster and a bit further away from the ride.
  
  The best thing about the screen is how the queue winds around the ride and also (especially) where the queue starts. Foliage is good too.

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  Stoksy Offline

  Yay for more work from you

   

  Louis makes a good point about the dragon head though

  posted 8 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  A nice screen!  But it seems a bit more like a collection of ideas rather than a complete concept.

   

  Perhaps a control building around the swinger and even a gift shop as well would add to it a bit.

  posted 8 years ago

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