Like Liam said, trying to hide the squared off land texture is a good place for improvement. But use the 1k ruins and land blocks instead of more LoTR rocks at this point.
Also try and find one small way to brighten it up possibly. Not sure how realist you're trying to make this, but most mini-golf's are quite bright and cheery.
@Liam Yeh needs a bit more finish/fleshing out. I've added some things here and there.
@Chemist I've thrown in some flowers, def helps.
@Jaychuppy TY matey.
@Scoop Yeh Openrct really has me inspired! Can't believe I only just downloaded it lol. Good call on the flume supports, I've fixed them up.
@Avanine Haha I'm bad at lily pads.
@Jaguar ADVENTURE
@Fizziz It was mostly one sitting! The best thing is that it isn't really inspired, it is based on Timber Falls but only in the sense that it's a golf course and a flume mixed together. I find it's easiest to build when you are getting ideas straight from your head.
This is good, but I can't say that it's any more than good. You have these fantastic ideas, but they're half-baked at the moment and the whole composition comes off underwhelming. Thicker foliage and more precise landscaping can help that surely, as would opening up the area just a little and making that transition from land-to-water cleaner. You can do better.
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AvanineCommuter Offline
beautiful interaction and landscaping. Great ideas going on here!
What's the deal with the four lily pads? Seems a bit random
Jaguar Offline
That golfing sure does look adventurous.
Fizzix Offline
Love the look of it. It feels like the section was built in only a few hours with really good inspiration, that emotion comes through for me.
Kumba Offline
My favorite theme!
G Force Offline
Like Liam said, trying to hide the squared off land texture is a good place for improvement. But use the 1k ruins and land blocks instead of more LoTR rocks at this point.
Also try and find one small way to brighten it up possibly. Not sure how realist you're trying to make this, but most mini-golf's are quite bright and cheery.
Dimi Offline
Looks great and original!
CoasterCreator9 Offline
Austin55 Fan Offline
Thanks all!
@Liam Yeh needs a bit more finish/fleshing out. I've added some things here and there.
@Chemist I've thrown in some flowers, def helps.
@Jaychuppy TY matey.
@Scoop Yeh Openrct really has me inspired! Can't believe I only just downloaded it lol. Good call on the flume supports, I've fixed them up.
@Avanine Haha I'm bad at lily pads.
@Jaguar ADVENTURE
@Fizziz It was mostly one sitting! The best thing is that it isn't really inspired, it is based on Timber Falls but only in the sense that it's a golf course and a flume mixed together. I find it's easiest to build when you are getting ideas straight from your head.
@Kumba #brownisatheme
@Gforce Have done.
@Dimi Thanks man.
@Coastercreator appreciate it.
SSSammy Offline
this is lovely
Xeccah Offline
This is good, but I can't say that it's any more than good. You have these fantastic ideas, but they're half-baked at the moment and the whole composition comes off underwhelming. Thicker foliage and more precise landscaping can help that surely, as would opening up the area just a little and making that transition from land-to-water cleaner. You can do better.
inthemanual Fan Offline
Incredible.
nin Fan Offline
Nincredible.
Austin55 Fan Offline
Austindible.