Screenshot / Yokum Creek Park

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  posted 8 years ago

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  Poke Offline

  It's a tad claustrophobic. Your architecture is also pretty muddled and unclear. But still very excited for more.

  posted 8 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Not quite as good as your other screens, texture wise this is a bit of a mess and all the roofs make it feel a bit convoluted.  

   

  Perhaps try and simplify either the roof textures or the path texture, just a bit of an overload right now.

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  soluna Offline

  I think the lamp object needs to go. it stands out too much (in a bad way) against the ncso backdrop. Also, the scale and height of the buildings is a tad too large for the width of the paths you're going for right now.

  posted 8 years ago

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  mintliqueur Fan Offline

  Wow, it's like 2003 all over again! (That's a compliment!) I've got to say I've always liked that lamp object. Scale-wise it fits very well here, with the full-tile-based architecture. I'm quite impressed by the amount of variety in form and texture you've managed to achieve with practically no custom scenery besides that lamp and seemingly not even hacking for more structural/textural possibilities. Well done! Even back in the day, before the onslaught of the hyper-detailed cso-based architecture, a mainstreet rarely looked this good, this vibrant.

   

  I especially like the use of the red path and that facade with the Egyptian statues just to the left of it. Simply brilliant. And very inspiring!

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  nin Offline

  A little cluttered as mentioned above, but still rad nonetheless. Reminds me of Walt Disney Escape or Wormwood or something.

  posted 8 years ago

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