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  G Force Offline

  Nice little area, cool to see some work form you. Might need some more detail here and there. Lot of it feels like 90% finished to me.
  
  What's with everyone building Six Flags all of a sudden?

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  chemist Offline

  Nice work Austin

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  csw Offline

  Surprised all 6 flags aren't texas

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  Liampie Offline

  Simplify the paths, lose the roadlines altogether.

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  Austin55 Offline

  Thanks G. Any specific details? Perhaps I need something in the attitude roof. And to be fair, I've always built Six Flags lol.
  
  Thanks Chemist.
  
  Good idea CSW. Next time...
  
  Good call Liampie. Road lines don't look good.

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  G Force Offline

  Yes, I'd add something to the roof of Attitudes.  Maybe change the roof to black and add a little bit of grey AC units or something along those lines.

   

  As for the road lines, you can just replace them with the angular ones, the curved lines never really look good unless you're using them with curved path pieces.

   

  Foliage could use a bit more as well, seems like a bit of an after though and is lacking mostly in underbrush.  But that's more of a personal opinion, some might like the negative space around the foliage.

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  nin Offline

  Only thing that consistently bugs me about your work is the overuse of dirt/grass texture combined with sparse foliage. Just leaves everything looking dark and empty. Maybe try thicker foliage?

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  FredD Offline

  That exit of the carroussel looks weird, ultra realistic Six Flags thus  

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  Louis! Offline

  This is excellent from you! Really well done. Is this the same park with the shuttle loop?

   

  Work on the paving though, get rid of the roadlines, don't be the sheep that follows everyone with them.

   

  I'd try and work on your scale a bit too, everything seems a bit too big, but then, thats probably because I work on a smaller scale

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  Austin55 Offline

  Thanks Fred, Nin, G and Louis. It is the same park Louis. 

   

  Here's some minor updates

   

  

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  Louis! Offline

  That's already much better. I'd continue the brick path into the queue of the Boomerang. I also wonder whether you need to try and connect the brick path sections together, whether it would look better or not.

   

  Let me know if you need any more layouts etc. Hopefully I'll build with you on it again at some point

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  Poke Offline

  Definitely has that gritty realistic feel I do enjoy.

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  Xeccah Offline

  contrary to what nin wants to see, do not please thicken up the foliage. it's ugly the way you've done it, but it makes it feel more real than if all of the foliage was manicured. i couldn't really care either way about the roadlines though.

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  Disney Imagineer Offline

  Austin! Love this!

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  Dimi Offline

  Is it supposed to look rather dark and gloomy? If not I think it could use some more bright colours, for example the flowers around the carousel.

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  chemist Offline

  
  

  Thanks Fred, Nin, G and Louis. It is the same park Louis. 

   

  Here's some minor updates

   

  

   

  Tbh the roadlines looked better on those paths. 

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