I love this area so much, great to see it again after you streamed it months ago. There a few things you could improve I think, mainly add barrels and other signs of life on the docks. Maybe a few smaller boats in the water and perhaps on land too. Maybe find out if you can include more lanterns?
Maybe if you could vary up the black boardwalk path a bit? Its slightly overbearing, especially next to the water like that. Some more detail around the waterfront might be desired as well, the rest of the screen feels much more depthful to me.
hmm.. I had the docks as tan path to begin with which looked more tasteful but I like that the black looks kinda jarring, especially with the spiked side friction track. It's not a realistic approach but I think it gives it a more piratey flavour. It also balances out the black/purple coaster which is just off screen.
I will definitely add some barrels and other details to the paths and docks though.. and more boats.
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Liampie Offline
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Pretty damn cool!
Stoksy Offline
Not sure I'm quite digging the black path, maybe the dark brown(?)
pierrot Fan Offline
<3, Should listen what Liam said though.
Lagom Offline
Beautiful.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WnMptkO04VE
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Maybe if you could vary up the black boardwalk path a bit? Its slightly overbearing, especially next to the water like that. Some more detail around the waterfront might be desired as well, the rest of the screen feels much more depthful to me.
alex Offline
hmm.. I had the docks as tan path to begin with which looked more tasteful but I like that the black looks kinda jarring, especially with the spiked side friction track. It's not a realistic approach but I think it gives it a more piratey flavour. It also balances out the black/purple coaster which is just off screen.
I will definitely add some barrels and other details to the paths and docks though.. and more boats.