Screenshot / A Flayed Man Has No Secrets

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  nin Offline

  Landscaping needs work. I commend you for the attempt at something more than flat ground and basic trees tho. Make the river to the left smooth and more natural, and maybe clump the trees/shrubs together more rather than keeping it sporadic. I'd suggest brighter colors but I don't think that's what you're going for here.

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  G Force Offline

  In Worlds of Fun I made a fixed pirate roof object that fills in the little gaps at the bottom, would look a bit better I think.  Foliage is a bit odd, the color of the grass pieces doesn't seem right, I'd try a different green.  

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