Screenshot / Aeroplane Coaster cont.

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  • Comment System%s's Photo
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  • Jaguar%s's Photo

    Now that looks so much better, it's very clean... the foliage though, it's too sparse. Try bunching up the trees together and surrounding them with bushes.

  • Lagom%s's Photo

    Looks a lot better!
    I wouldn't mind to see more colour in there though!
    Paths look a bit steril. Maybe a few more stalls, lamp posts, litter bins etc could do wonders.
    Good job none the less.

  • SensualEthiopianPolice%s's Photo

    Thanks. I've already taken your advice, but if there's any other criticisms you have, I'm all ears. I need this map to be considerably good.

  • Lagom%s's Photo

    I'm no expert, but I would try to add some tables with a few umbrellas. Just to clarify what I mean:

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    I would also reconsider the small wooden kiddie coaster. Maybe a small junior coaster would work better here.

    Jaguar has a point too about the foliage. I would recommend to take a look at Faas's Vitaminland here, for inspiration.
    Maybe a small pond or something could help too.

    Keep it up

  • F0ndue%s's Photo

    I'd recommend that you smooth out the bottom of the first drop. It is way too tight right now. 

  • Scoop%s's Photo

    This is a HUUUUGGGEEEE Improvement.

  • SensualEthiopianPolice%s's Photo


    This is a HUUUUGGGEEEE Improvement.



    I consider it an apology for my other park 
  • TommytheJerk%s's Photo

    I've said it before and I'll say it again; I love your woodies.

  • alex%s's Photo

    This is pretty cool. I'd consider adding some slanted supports to the lift hill (which the track below can pass through). I agree with Lagom about adding some colour too. Some bright flowers in those planters would go a long way.

  • YoloSweggLord%s's Photo


    This is pretty cool. I'd consider adding some slanted supports to the lift hill (which the track below can pass through). I agree with Lagom about adding some colour too. Some bright flowers in those planters would go a long way.

    Unfortunately it looks like there's no empty space between the track and the station on the side facing us, other than that slant supports would be a good idea. 

  • X Louis%s's Photo

    Its good, you sure know how to build your woodies!-Apple

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