Screenshot / City skyline and bridge to the future

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  posted 8 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  You had a good start here! Variation between the skyscrapers, but not too much, ideas like the round tower and the roadlines, the inclusion of a small historic building, all good conscious choices. All just very rough around the edges. First of all I think the city needs to be a bit more spaceous. Sidewalks would've helped. Also doors and other distinctive features on the ground floors. Some details to the roofs. the two 3x3 skyscrapers at the opposite sides of the intersection are aligning weirdly, I'd always try to avoid that. Try some shapes that are not square. The round tower is too thick at the bottom and because everything else was so square and made using just single scenery items and land blocks the style stood out badly.
  
  I hope I can comment on the whole park soon. It's obvious that you're new to LL, but you seem talented! Looking forward to seeing more. Definitely post screens of your projects so we can help!

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  Poke Offline

  Listen to liam dude, a great framework just lacks in execution!

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  Lilith Offline

  I wish I would've given myself more time on this, you can tell where I rushed and plopped down some 2x2 or 3x3 buildings. I made some good and some bad choices here. Building with a deadline is hard, I don't know how you guys do it so well! But thank you for all the advice, I really look forward to everyone's help with future projects.

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  Liampie Offline

  I forgot to mention, I think you should check out this park. Great urban area.

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