Screenshot / Twelve Birch Park

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  posted 8 years ago

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  F0ndue Offline

  I really like the vibe, but some of the objects are just not very pleasant to the eye. Best if you replace those white fences and trashcans at the entrance. 

  posted 8 years ago

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  G Force Offline

  Foliage could use work, paint the birch trunks grey and use the moss green for the leaves. Just to many colors in the foliage overall I think.
  
  Also replace the diagonal wooden fence you have with ITMs version. Found in BGA, Westwinds among many other parks...

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  Faas Offline

  I love this. Great start! Welcome. 

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  Scoop Offline

  how do you get to the entrance?

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  Jaguar Offline

  Very cool and very colorful... I like that building's interior.

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  SlayMeGaga Offline

  I feel the colors could use some work. Also I would fix that umbrella by the fence and change those diagonal wooden fences like G Force said. When I saw the screenshot title btw I thought it said Twelve Bitch Park lol.

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  TommytheJerk Offline

  Thanks for all your positive comments! And thanks for the tips as well; me and X Louis (along with some other contribtuors, none of whom I know to be registered here) have been adjusting accordingly and the results speak for themselves. I think I'll hold off on an updated screenshot for a while, since there's still a lot of work to do.

   

   

  
  

  how do you get to the entrance?

  The idea is that the path from the building with the cutaway loops around back to where the entrance is. It's not super clear right now, I'll admit, but I think that's fixable.

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  Liampie Offline

  Push the entrance about ten tiles back, bring it close to the big plaza. Lose the dip in the path. Fix the confusing accessibility in the process.

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  YoloSweggLord Offline

  
  

  Thanks for all your positive comments! And thanks for the tips as well; me and X Louis (along with some other contribtuors, none of whom I know to be registered here) have been adjusting accordingly and the results speak for themselves. I think I'll hold off on an updated screenshot for a while, since there's still a lot of work to do.

  I actually did help a bit with the park on X Louis's server, but it was after this screenshot and none of my work is in the current area, anyways. In the future, though, if you'd like to check with me to see if my work is in the screenshot, that'd be wonderful.

  Anyways, the park is coming along brilliantly. The parking lot is very well designed, and the entrance path looks nice and organic with the terrain variations.

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