Screenshot / POSIXLAND

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  Comment System Offline

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  posted 11 years ago

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  ][ntamin22 Offline

  aaaalmost there; I would shift some foliage around so it is clumpier and gives clear focal areas rather than covering evenly.

  posted 11 years ago

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  Louis! Offline

  Much better improvement. But I agree with ][

  posted 11 years ago

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  Liampie Offline

  I tried to, but I found it really difficult to not cover so much land. I tend to smoothen the land texture transitions with bushes, but I shouldn't here. I might refine it a little, but this will be the overall final look. The foliage is what kept me from finishing this area because it was shit before and until yesterday I didn't know how to make it more posix-esque.

   

  By the way, this screen is already outdated (I wouldn't have posted this screen if I knew); I changed the red fences to brown. It was the final intervention to really make this area alive, I now no longer consider this area inferior.

   

  edit: How is the layout looking?

  posted 11 years ago

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  csw Offline

  It all feels very boring. I would add another color of green in the foliage somewhere. It's not your style, and it shows. The layout is the best part of the screen, but the rest is pretty bland, even if that's what you're going for. 50%

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  Ling Offline

  I always love to see a well-executed Arrow suspended coaster. I agree with what has already been said regarding the foliage. Some of the structures around the queue seem a bit... random.

  posted 11 years ago

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